Speeches / IELTS SPEAKING PART 1 - Tell me about the house/flat you live in [3]

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Tell me about the house/flat you live in.

Answer:
Well first of all, the main thing you need to know is that I am living in a small flat, only approximate 40 square meter. In fact, it is a beautiful flat. There is a living room where I has been hung a lot of picture of my family and friends. Plus I also decorate some flowers on the wall and on my desk in front of the window. I sleep there sometime. Besides, there are a bathroom, a kitchen and upstairs. On top of that I can also add that there is a front yard that I have been sharing with my neighbors which means neighbors' children often come here to play their favorite games, especially football. Something else that I need to comment on is that there is a back small garden. So actually, it is the most wonderful part of my flat where I often grow little flowers, bonsais and have small parties with my friends at weekends.

Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Private car ownership has grown, led to traffic congestion [3]

Question:
Private car ownership has grown grammatically in recent years. This has led to a rise in traffic congestion.
What could governments and individuals do to reduce congestion?

Answer:
Growing car ownership has become a matter of great concern in the recent years. There are several effects caused by this adverse trend, one of them that interests quite a lot of government as well as people in society is traffic congestion. However, I believe, there are several measures to overcome this problem.

In today's modern society, a person who own cars is not a considerable thing. Along with this, related issues can be anticipated. To tackle these problems, I think the most obvious solution would be that government could tax car at a high level. The advantage of this policy is that the one who would like to purchase a car will have to consider carefully before they spend a large amount of money on this.

Another opinion is that government could make and ban enforces laws for these transport types. For example, we need to stipulate clearly that which streets the cars are or not allowed to run in. Besides, for the streets where the traffic jam is frequently take place, we might restrict an active time for these transports, especially, at rush hours.

Furthermore, traffic congestion could be significantly declined if there are contributions from each individual in society. Besides seriously obeying the traffic laws, each person could reduce their dependence on cars, instead they can travel by the public transports such as buses, train, ect.

In conclusion, various measures can be taken to combat the problems that are certain to arise as the ones who possess cars growing up quickly year after year.