Essays / Information about a photograph taken in a school on a special occasion - letter [3]

Hi Davier,
in my opinion this is an easy type of essay. The type of essay that you need to write is an INFORMAL LETTER/EMAIL.
Start email in an informal way.
Use paragraphs to express every single point and always say how do you think.
Use informal language: short forms and phrasal verbs.
End email in an informal way.
NOTE: The email is often a personal thing thats the reason why you should write informal.
Good luck!!!
fotini...

Writing Feedback / Increasing fuel cost is just a band aid for solving environmental issues [3]

Hi, eirehc
I am really suprised with this essay, because its excellent. You've corrected some mistakes that you had in older essays.
You have really improved your writing skills and i think that you will do great in your exam.

foteini.

Writing Feedback / COMPARE AND CONTRAST TECHNOLOGY NOW AND BEFORE [3]

easier and fun: I think that instead of fun you should put an other word, such as more comfortable.
Instead of writing : From time to time, there are new technologies invented that helps in making life easier for most people, from communication, transportation, and even to entertainment. I think you should write : With the passing of the years technology becomes better and better ( and then you can write an example. For example you can compare one item that has become better in the passing of the years, such as a phone, a TV etc.)

E-mails, cellphones, and internet are only a few examples of technological improvements in communication.
Back then, people... : You should write Then,people...
Really good job... I really like your statement at the second paragraph. ;)
In the old age, transportation was*(was and not were) only limited to horses and ships that took them days before they arrive in their respective destinations. With these innovations on transportation, people are now able to visit different places throughout the world.

favorite -- favourite * the both are correct.
which make the scenes more real : here its better to use the word more realistic.
I really like your conclusion. :)
Finally, I can say that you have done a really nice work and your mistakes are really small.
Walk on like this..

Foteini.

Research Papers / Help with MLA Citation (Website Sources) [2]

Hi, I think your research is correct, but an other web site that can give you many ideas could be "son of citation machine".