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Name: sara waled
Joined: Sep 15, 2014
Last Post: Sep 17, 2014
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sara waled   
Sep 15, 2014
Writing Feedback / Living in country or city? Answer depends on the ages, hobbies and gender of each person. [3]

I think the answer for this question depends on the ages , hobbies , and gender of each person . in my opinion I prefer city for different reasons . in the city there are many schools and the students will have better education in addiction , people will have more job opportunity moreover , the city has more recreation facilities that people can visit and have fun time such as shopping centers , clubs , movie theaters , parks , restaurants , and markets furthermore, the city has lots of transportation that people can use like cars , buses , airplanes , and trains also , city has different service that helps people includes hospital and library .and if you look for any kind of foods , drugs you can buy it from there .In the other hands of course country has an advantage than city for example , the air in the country is cleaner than the city in addiction of having a more natural place that people can visit and have a more enjoyable time . citizen in the country has an opportunity of having an organic food because they can plant any kind of foods they want such as seeds , nuts , fruit , vegetables . in short I think the city is best for me .

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sara waled   
Sep 17, 2014
Writing Feedback / The best gift for a child? Books help to learn more skills such as pronouncing and reading [3]

There are many variety of great gift that we can give it to the child , from my personal opinion the best gift child can have is a book . I feel this way for three different reasons. First, child can learn more from the book . Second, child will have an enjoyable time . Third, child can participate this gift with others. For these reasons . I will explain in following essay. I feel there is no better gift for child than book.

To begin with , learn more from the book . Books help child to learn more skills such as pronouncing and reading different words also , child write will improve after answering questions that related to different chapters for example child usually will finish reading chapter and then after each end of chapter there is a lots of questions with different type full the filed, multiple choose that examine child understood. Moreover , child will learn various knowledge and it may help him to get higher grade in school .

Secondly , child will have an enjoyable time . Children loves integrate learning with fun and that is indicate why the books have an interesting cover and colorful text with comic art .

Thirdly, child can participate this gift with others. Child can shared book with his friends and learned as group or he might lends his book to a friend and visa-versa and that will improve lack of ownership .I remember when i was i child my mother give me story of pet and after i went to school i give to my teacher and she read the story for whole class .

In conclusion , I feel that a book is the very best gift to give to a child since he is young and can learn more skills.
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