Writing Feedback / Mankind nowadays face their natural enemy, nature. IELTS Writing Task 2 [3]

Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in their contribution to global warming.
What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming ?

Mankind nowadays face their natural enemy, nature. Damaged nature due to human activities rise the global warming and resulting climate changes and raising in sea level. The executive of countries among the world unite to declaration fight again global warming and decrease the effect. Advanced countries move along develop countries are race to improve green technology to reduce the improving risk of global warming.

Due the fact, the most responsible to effected global warming is industrial activities based on economic activities in developed countries. Walhi, organize who concern in environmental released data in 2007 according to damaged environment due to industrial activities in Indonesia is 2,7 hectares each years and increase sea level 7 cm every years causing flood and abrasion. Industrial activities in develop countries not only stop in damaged nature but also exploit natural resource, commonly develop countries depend their economic in export of natural resources. This economics activities also worse situations.

Contribute of advanced countries to reveal the situations in develop countries to reduce the economic activities, which damaged nature must be stopped. Moving together between countries affiliation in United Nation to protect nature and decrease the risk of global warming was held in Indonesia in Nusa Dua Bali, 2007. The concern of forum was to preparation countries among the world to reduce global warming and gas carbon after Kyoto Protocol. Not only global participation the executive from develop countries must produce policy to adopt green program along industrial activities even green technology and the company must responsible to reduce natural damaged by spend their income on Company Social Responsibility (CSR) who can be use for reforestation and other natural activities.

To conclude, protect our nature from high-risk activities who can damage environment must be done together among countries despite advance or develop. The executive and society must synchronize green-program to synergy the action.

Writing Feedback / The dramatically fluctuations are composite by Canada, Italy, Japan and France - IELTS table chart [7]

The table below shows personal savings as a percentage of personal
income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2000.

Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features,
and make any relevant comparisons

The table chart illustrates personal savings as a percentage of personal loans in several nations in 1970, 1990 and 2000, a period of three decades. The chart shows data from seven nations there are Canada, France, Germany, Italy, Japan, UK and USA. The dramatically fluctuations are composite by Canada, Italy, Japan and France.

Over all, the personal savings as a percentage of personal loans in listed nations recorded decreased among three decades.

According to table list on last period, 2000 years, France and Japan were in first positions in the percentage of saving loans per-persons on these two nations were 13,6 % ,however the trend in each nations were different. While France in 1990 recorded by 11,5 % and reach the peak was in 1970 with 18,7% , Japan the percentages of passive income by private account recorded 17,6% as the top in 1970 and in 1990 decrease slightly to 12,1 %. Second positions of the list was Germany, this nation in 2000 recorded by 11, 8 % decrease slightly, due the fact in 1970 and 1990 Germany remain steadily at 13,8 % of saving loans each persons. Fourth and fifth positions of nations in 2000 were Italy and UK at 11,4 % and 11,6 % although that, Italy was the highest in 1970 reached 29,5 % contrasting with UK in 1970 recorded by 9,2 %, ones of smallest, in 1990 UK was smallest ones with 8,2 % of saving loans each person however Italy, in 1990 reach 17,6 % . The sixth of saving loan in period 2000 was USA reached 4,0 % . The highest level of saving in USA nation was in 8,2 % in 1970 but among the period was decreased can be looked in 1990 just 5,5 %. The last position nations of saving loans in 2000 per-persons was Canada by 1,9 % however, Canadian in 1970 the percentages of saving loans was 5,6 % and increased significantly in 1990, it was 11,5 %