softball16
Nov 25, 2014
Undergraduate / Mathematics major; It took me quite a long time to finally realize what I wanted to study in college [18]
I feel this would be my final draft. I used some of the work you provided for me and I incorporated in my essay. As of now, I feel content with my essay. Just uploading it online to get some last minute feedback but I don't think I would make any major changes after this. Thank you for all your advice and help I really appreciate it!!
My desire to pursue Math as a major comes from the experiences that have enhanced not only my interest in the subject but the love I already had for it. These experiences allowed me to really grasp the importance of math as it's what drives our world forward. Without Math, commerce would cease to exist and the world as we know it would come to a standstill. Math has been an integral part of my everyday life since I first started school; it has opened a lot of opportunities for me that have helped me grow as a person. I started to see a lot of positive changes in my life.
When I was younger I was never involved in any extracurricular activities, but there was one particular program that took me out of my regular comfort zone. I was in the Mathletes throughout middle school and I had to participate in tournaments that were held around the city, something I wasn't used too. This opportunity really enhanced my math skills, as I was able to learn different methods of solving problems that weren't shown in a regular classroom as they were preparing us for these competitions. Not only did I learn how to improve in my math skills, but I also learned how to become more vocal and how to work well in a team that depended on one another. I feel that these assets that I developed through this educational program have helped me through my academic years and will continue to be beneficial towards my future success.
Another opportunity that I was able to be a part of through my love for math was the Jaime Escalante Program. It was offered only to a few students who were doing exceptionally well in their math classes. It prepared us for the advanced math classes we were going to take the next couple of years and it also opened a chance for me to win a scholarship in high school. I applied for the Jaime Escalante Scholarship, which was open for all the seniors who showed how math made a positive impact in their academics. I used the program as an example in my essay since it kept me on track with my classes through high school. The scholarship helped me finance my future college needs as an incoming student through the prize that the scholarship offered.
The most recent volunteer work that I've been a part of in college is tutoring my peers with their math classes. By helping others who were weak in numbers through tutoring, I learned that Math is not just all about numbers. It is about life as well. Math is what drives our world forward. Technological advances, business, even cooking and baking, all require that computations be done and completed accurately for the outcome of the equations to become acceptable and credible. I was able to realize this as I would help my peers work on a problem step by step and if we did a slightest error on any of the steps the rest of the work would be incorrect. In life, in order to get things done right everything else before it has to be correct as well.
My interest and love for Math started to grow immensely throughout the years. I love Math for its simplicity and clarity. It is definite and offers Mathematicians a look at life in a way that other people would not see. We see the beauty of life through numbers and we offer to give back that beauty in a way that those who cannot understand Math can appreciate. I hope to be able to pursue my Math major in the hopes of offering the others in the world an opportunity to see the beauty and value of Math through my eyes.
I feel this would be my final draft. I used some of the work you provided for me and I incorporated in my essay. As of now, I feel content with my essay. Just uploading it online to get some last minute feedback but I don't think I would make any major changes after this. Thank you for all your advice and help I really appreciate it!!
My desire to pursue Math as a major comes from the experiences that have enhanced not only my interest in the subject but the love I already had for it. These experiences allowed me to really grasp the importance of math as it's what drives our world forward. Without Math, commerce would cease to exist and the world as we know it would come to a standstill. Math has been an integral part of my everyday life since I first started school; it has opened a lot of opportunities for me that have helped me grow as a person. I started to see a lot of positive changes in my life.
When I was younger I was never involved in any extracurricular activities, but there was one particular program that took me out of my regular comfort zone. I was in the Mathletes throughout middle school and I had to participate in tournaments that were held around the city, something I wasn't used too. This opportunity really enhanced my math skills, as I was able to learn different methods of solving problems that weren't shown in a regular classroom as they were preparing us for these competitions. Not only did I learn how to improve in my math skills, but I also learned how to become more vocal and how to work well in a team that depended on one another. I feel that these assets that I developed through this educational program have helped me through my academic years and will continue to be beneficial towards my future success.
Another opportunity that I was able to be a part of through my love for math was the Jaime Escalante Program. It was offered only to a few students who were doing exceptionally well in their math classes. It prepared us for the advanced math classes we were going to take the next couple of years and it also opened a chance for me to win a scholarship in high school. I applied for the Jaime Escalante Scholarship, which was open for all the seniors who showed how math made a positive impact in their academics. I used the program as an example in my essay since it kept me on track with my classes through high school. The scholarship helped me finance my future college needs as an incoming student through the prize that the scholarship offered.
The most recent volunteer work that I've been a part of in college is tutoring my peers with their math classes. By helping others who were weak in numbers through tutoring, I learned that Math is not just all about numbers. It is about life as well. Math is what drives our world forward. Technological advances, business, even cooking and baking, all require that computations be done and completed accurately for the outcome of the equations to become acceptable and credible. I was able to realize this as I would help my peers work on a problem step by step and if we did a slightest error on any of the steps the rest of the work would be incorrect. In life, in order to get things done right everything else before it has to be correct as well.
My interest and love for Math started to grow immensely throughout the years. I love Math for its simplicity and clarity. It is definite and offers Mathematicians a look at life in a way that other people would not see. We see the beauty of life through numbers and we offer to give back that beauty in a way that those who cannot understand Math can appreciate. I hope to be able to pursue my Math major in the hopes of offering the others in the world an opportunity to see the beauty and value of Math through my eyes.