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Posts by vlinh1991 [Suspended]
Name: lĩnh
Joined: Nov 29, 2014
Last Post: Dec 9, 2014
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From: Viet Nam
School: economic university

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vlinh1991   
Dec 9, 2014
Writing Feedback / Should teachers be paid more when some people gain huge money, out of scale of their work importance [5]

briannalottchea
How about this: appreciate dignity and ethics, which are priceless gifts that many people want to exchange for money but cannot.
Yes, I think this would work.
Is this supposed to be mental as in your mind or metal as in the hard, shiny thing? hahaha sorry if that's a bit unclear.

=> YES. Thank you for all your kind help
can you tell me your facebook address?. i want to be your friend for exchange English.
vlinh1991   
Dec 3, 2014
Writing Feedback / Should teachers be paid more when some people gain huge money, out of scale of their work importance [5]

"are also appreciated dignity and ethics, those is priceless gift that many people are to exchange their large number of money for it but that cannot.I'm sorry, I can't really understand this sentence" => they are appreciated about dignity and ethics, that are priceless gift that many people want to (be to) exchange their money for priceless gift (it), but they cannot exchange.

"but then the unemployment has stayed with them for a long time. This is unclear" => can it be: but then they are unemployed for a long time?

"I think that people make products, which people favorite or people are satisfied their valuable mental, so that they are willing to pay a large sum of money to use such products.I can't really understand this sentence either. Just needs to be reworded." => i think that people are willing to pay a large sum of money to use metal products,it are products that people favorite and are satisfied, for instance, movies or songs, so that anyone who can make mental products is worthy of their high remuneration.

i graduated in economic, i am studying ielts (academic), i am studying master's degree. i come from Vietnam, i hope you will help me. thank you very much
vlinh1991   
Dec 2, 2014
Writing Feedback / Should teachers be paid more when some people gain huge money, out of scale of their work importance [5]

In today's society people have many choices for their career, some of the important jobs are undervalued, whereas economic works are complimented. Some people are of the opinion that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are not underpaid, whereas other people like actors or company bosses are not overpaid. Nevertheless, I am inclined to believe that actors star and actresses and people who run large companies are worthy of huge sum of money that they being paid, owing to the following reasons. [..]
vlinh1991   
Dec 2, 2014
Writing Feedback / Due to influence of world-wide media, the gap between cultures is narrowing. [2]

"But opponent of global culture believes, this idea has introduce with powers who have special tools for advertising and with their experts and analyst help introduce their own idea and in some cases they changes their nations believes so in this situation national culture could removed, some custom would forgotten. For example Iranian had a ceremony some days before new year which they pass on the fire to removes their year worst memories but nowadays this is affected by west custom in new year it is converted to a fireworks which is far from that believes." i think that you used "concession and refutation"..it is reasonable
vlinh1991   
Dec 1, 2014
Writing Feedback / Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. [5]

Nowadays, globalization is performing significant conversions, a trend that be bound to happen is inevitable, so providing that a separate nation do not participate in that process, they will be isolated and backward

i mean that Nowadays, globalization has significant conversions, a trend that be bound to happen, beaucause providing that a separate nation do not participate in that process, they will be isolated and backward
vlinh1991   
Nov 30, 2014
Writing Feedback / Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. [5]

Nowadays, globalization is performing significant conversions, a trend that be bound to happen is inevitable, so providing that a separate nation do not participate in that process, they will be isolated and backward. Some people are of the opinion that globalization will be to abolish separate cultural identity of each country. Nevertheless, I am inclined to believe that not only will globalization remain and develop traditional culture, but it also absorbs the quintessence of cultures in the world, owing to the following reason.

First of all, one of the globalization's immensely popular properties which befall as a postulation is the integration. It let people immigrate to anywhere that they are to, especially traveling. Tourist usually visit the places where has special and complicated cultures, namely cuisine, folklore and folk dance. This folk custom help local resident make numerous profits from tourist and it forces local government as well as local people to be interested in restoring and improving beautiful traditions which has already been lost.

Secondly, proponent of the idea argue that globalization is bound to result in the loss of culture identity. There may be some truth in their statement, nevertheless it is flowed because globalized process boost exchange of the culture between countries each other, it is a selective absorption but not loss of cultural identity. For instance, multinational culture festivities, it embraces the culture in different parts of the world, people can familiarize themselves with new folk songs and craftsmanship. It is highly liable that they will begin improve on their own, not only will they remain older culture, but they also make more and more it is complete.

I am convinced that globalization is a incorporated process about culture, people can reduce and complement necessary material of traditional culture. I hope that, in the future people will bring into play cultural tradition of their own, and disseminate it over the world.
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