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Name: K Zhang
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Last Post: Dec 25, 2014
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zkc19   
Dec 25, 2014
Undergraduate / Numbers are intricately woven in our lives, and do not fail to fascinate us - NYU essay [7]

I'm sorry but truth to be told, I was having a hard time understanding the linkage between the numbers and public health major. In fact, from your first sentence I thought you were applying to mathematics major. You did provide logic sentences in the essay, but I dnt think this logic works.

The rest parts of the essay are good.
zkc19   
Dec 22, 2014
Undergraduate / The failure that I want to relate is connected to the National Olympiad in Mathematics. [3]

For Penn's essay I think you need to specify more, like this one -->

I love the attitude of practicality at the University of Pennsylvania. The university offers a great variety of internships and jobs, both national and international. There is even a special opportunity for international students - The U.S. Job Search for International Students. Indeed, the University of Pennsylvania has one of the best facilities for international students - The International Student and Scholar Services is always ready to assist students from other countries.

Penn AO already knows it, tell them something about how you connect to it.

For the common application, I dnt know for sure whether failure is a good topic to choose since it can reflect a lot of flaws on you and therefore backfires your application. Anyway, the first thing I notice is that you really need to make the whole story into several paragraphs. Or otherwise readers might not want to continue reading and just skip the whole paragraph. (AOs do not have much time.)
zkc19   
Dec 6, 2014
Undergraduate / I wondered how humans could prove their existence after reading the "brain-in-a-vat" - 'Why' Essay [4]

How does the University of Chicago, as you know it now, satisfy your desire for a particular kind of learning, community, and future? Please address with some specificity your own wishes and how they relate to UChicago.

It's a cold day, yet University of Chicago students are discussing Kant at the bus station: a weird but common scene at Hyde Park. When a current UChicago student depicted it to me, I could not help but become fond of this school and its members, who explore passionately, think deeply, and argue actively.

I wondered how humans could prove their existence after reading the "brain-in-a-vat" theory, which holds that human thoughts are the results of a computer program. I was curious why the role of religion did not diminish despite of the scientific explanations for most phenomena. I pondered what it felt for a bat to be a bat. These issues seemed to have an ongoing series of arguments and I have tried but could not find a clear answer on either side. However, when I posed those questions to my classmates, they laughed them off as "worthless jokes". It was hard to find a community with such shared interests in my high school, which is why I was so excited when a UChicago student told me that he spent most of his time thinking. The opportunity to join an "incredible tradition of inquiry," as the recent Aim of Education speaker said, attracts thinkers like me to this community. It is a place where inquiry is the mainstream, where the eccentric yet scholarly thoughts that many ignore constitute the norm. The thoughtful air and the mindset of constant exploration attract me to UChicago. Courses such as "Philosophical Perspectives" would allow me to explore issues that I have long been curious about, for example the place of human beings in the world. I believe these discussions are able to bring me to a more profound way of thinking.

The numerous academic and research opportunities also intrigue me. I enjoyed reading Professor Lucas's book Recursive Methods in Economic Dynamics and the way he uses data and quantitative methods to illustrate his arguments. When I was a little girl, I could sense that the numbers on my parents' papers could not wait to communicate with me, but I didn't understand what they were saying. As time went by, I gradually became familiar with the language of numbers and Professor Lucas's book showed me much more. When numbers come together, they speak for the economic status of nations, stand for conditions of labor markets or anticipate business cycles. In addition to Professor Lucas's book, I was also impressed with Freakonomics written by Professor Levitt. His out-of-the-box approach in presenting information and linking sumo wrestlers to economic theories is said to permeate throughout the entire academic atmosphere at UChicago. As I learn more about other exciting UChicago projects, I hope for a closer interaction with these unconventional professors at UChicago and participation in similar research projects, in order to mold my own opinion and analysis together. I want to work on Professor Sonnenschein's project on social choices, connecting analysis of collective decisions with considerations of psychology, preferences, and social welfare, simply because the social influences on economic policy are fascinating to examine.

Although it is important to me, academia would not make up my whole life at UChicago. I envision myself participating in the annual Polar Bear Run with my costume, cheering for friends during the Humans vs. Zombies game, and enjoying the Summer Breeze events on the Main Quads. Given its unconventional academic opportunities and colorful days, the University of Chicago is an ideal place, and four years might actually not be enough.
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