Jenya1970
Feb 12, 2015
Writing Feedback / Children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need; children and crimes [2]
Your essay is really very good.I think you can also include the following staements somewhere in your essay to make it more impressive.
Just like the food is essential for physical health in the same way love and acceptance is the food for mental health of the children.Those children who are deprived of love suffers from the feeling of rejection all the time. This loneliness leads them to do certain crimes either to attract attention from their parents or they keep themselves busy doing destructive work to take revenge of their situation.After all, " Idle mind is Devil's workshop."
Your essay is really very good.I think you can also include the following staements somewhere in your essay to make it more impressive.
Just like the food is essential for physical health in the same way love and acceptance is the food for mental health of the children.Those children who are deprived of love suffers from the feeling of rejection all the time. This loneliness leads them to do certain crimes either to attract attention from their parents or they keep themselves busy doing destructive work to take revenge of their situation.After all, " Idle mind is Devil's workshop."