Posts by trina

trina

Feb 21, 2015

Writing Feedback / 'I just want to let you know that I moved to a new house' - Letter to a friend - IELTS [4]

Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter:

1. explain why you have moved
2. describe the new house
3. Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Maria,

I hope you are doing well. I just want to let you know that I moved to a new house. I left my old house beacuse I realized it is too far from my workplace.

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trina

Feb 21, 2015

Writing Feedback / World's population has peaked at a geometric rate in this day and age. IELTS WRITING TASK II [4]

I totally agree with EF_Season's comment. Also, I think you don't need to separate your 3rd paragraph from your 2nd since they are correlated.

trina

Feb 22, 2015

Writing Feedback / IELTS task 2: Government alone cannot defeat the climate change! [3]

Later we could conclude that life on Earth could be dangerous to humans, so we need to raise more money to explore a possibility to go to Mars. Maybe on Mars we'll discover unfriendly aliens that we could fight after we raise enough global income

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Hi Vns9x, just a note It makes our planet warmer reach ( each )day.Also, I think it will be good if you will have some description of the climate change.