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Name: Susan Meader
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Last Post: May 25, 2015
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Grammar, Usage /
My parents are almost alike [7]
You need to correct some spelling errors. In the first sentence, the word should spelled "you". In the third sentence, the word should be spelled "found". The last sentence isn't clear, so you should remove it.
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Fast food taxation as the method to reduce obesity among people. [4]
To solve this problem, I would argue that governments play an important role to impose a higher tax on this kind of food, and people should realize the bad effect of consuming
too much fast food.
The predominant reason of this problem is eating unhealthy food
that contains chemicals, saturated fats, and sodium.
For example, people who prefer consuming fast food such
as fried chicken at McDonalds are more likely to get sick easily in the future
which is resulted by chemical influence . As a consequence, there is no doubt that eating much fast food will
suffer the number of people cause health problems.
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