Writing Feedback / The Method of Recycling Plastic Bottles for New Uses [3]

Dear Stacy Ayu Handayani

I would like to give you some suggestion. Actually your writing is good, yet you can use a creative words in order to avoid the same words in one sentence. Let me try : Clearly, what stands in the diagram is that there are two main processes of recycling plastic bottles and these need 8 steps to gain perfectly result.

Writing Feedback / Is It Better to Change Job Than to Do The Same Job? [4]

Dear Stacy Ayu Handayani

Your idea is unique and simple, but I just want to suggest you not to repeat the same word such word "get" in your introduction, it would be better if you use obtain. For instance, to obtain a better income