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Raj44

May 4, 2015

Writing Feedback / The people will eventually lose interest in going to Cinema. Agree or disagree? [3]

Thank you @ christineB for helping me to understand that i need to do a lot of hard work in order to achieve better score in ielts.

I will try my best and soon post a better essay here.

Raj44

May 4, 2015

Letters / Waiter position - job application letter General Writing IELTS TASK 1 [4]

you have made many grammer mistakes.please read out the following sentences carefully for undestanding .

I am writing on behalf of your advertisemeant related to post of a waiter on your website.
I am going to unicersity________________________( in this way the sentence will have a more sense and it will also be grammmatically correct.)
Beverages.
The previous restaurant in which i have ___________
I WAS working in this restaurant for _______to overseas DURING MY TERM BREAK________
lookin forward FOR hearing____
You need to learn about tense ,prepositions,and use of during and also make sure that sentence make a complete sense.

Raj44

May 4, 2015

Writing Feedback / The people will eventually lose interest in going to Cinema. Agree or disagree? [3]

Please friends check my essay for any mistakes or improvements.

Some people warn that the era of the silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema.Do you agree or disagree?

Cinema has been considered as an extremely powerful source of entertainment from many years.However some people feel that it's trend has decreased owing to certain reasons,but still I believe that inspite of major evolution in the field of entertainment ,the Cinema would not lost it's existance.

To begin with the critics of Cinema,they may question it's value as they might think that large screen LCD's with better video and sound quality may replace cinema.

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