Writing Feedback / CREATING PELLETS - the sawdust passes three physical process and two temperature treatments [3]

The flow chart reveals how to make wood pellets in order to heat the buildings. Overall, there are two forms of wood before being pellets. It is also essential to note that the sawdust passes three physical process and two temperature treatments to create pellets.

To begin with, sawmill's waste form is changed two times. The first, sawdust is an original material then it becomes smaller form which is fibers. After several treatments, they turn to be pellets. Nest, the pellets are packaged to bags for marketing.

Interestingly, to create pellets there are three physical treatments which are hammering, forcing, and vacuuming, while the temperature-control treatments are also needed in which dampening and cooling are part of them. Move to more detail analysis, the first process, sawdust passes hammering to create smaller forms and then fibers formed and they dampened with steam. Furthermore, they are forced to become pellets. To produce the final product of pellets, preservation is needed in order to make them ready to be sold. The fresh pellets then are cooled to make them durable. The last process is to do vacuuming and packaging the pellets to specific weight and cover. Most of the time, pellets are put into bags which have increase-capacity about 40 pound or 18 kilo of pellets per bag to be released to the market.

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Writing Feedback / Life now and furtherback - living in recent years is better than 100 years ago. IELTS TASK 2. [3]

Life now is better than it was 100 years ago.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Life has a lot of aspects that make it able to compare with the past. Some people argue that living nowadays is better than living in a century ago. This essay partly agrees with the argument. The first reason is there are plenty inventions that make life easier and development of knowledge that reduce risk of disease which was dangerous in the past, while the negative affects also appear like reducing familiar communication and others.

Living in recent years is better than living in 100 years ago in several cases. People today have a big deal accessibility that make them easier to do duty or interest. That is possible because there are plenty tools and innovations invented over a century. For example, in most place of the world, people were going to walk in order to go around. Yet, nowadays people just call taxi or drive a car to go. Other case, communicating to relations in different island or city was very difficult. People had to write letters and sent it via post, moreover the time taken was also long. But, people today are able to keep in touch with end of their fingers by texting email or other modern forms of modern communication. Those make life easier. On the other word, life becomes better than before.

Health as an important role of life has been improving in knowledge and tools. Many diseases have been able to detect early and the form of medicines are diverse now. For example, pox that was deathly disease on the past becomes not dangerous because of invention of vaccine. It makes people live healthier and do not worry about the illness. The access to hospital and other public health transports have been changing significantly, so if there is an accident or emergency call, the paramedic easily find and help the victim.

Standing in contrast, warm communication and friendly inhabitants are rarely found. People have evolved becoming workaholic and do not pay enough time to talk each other. According to recent research result, low frequency of communication and rigid form of communication make people's lifetime reduce significantly. People, in the past, lived happier in which they could live longer than now. It is one of the negative point of living in recent years.

Deeply deliberating about this problem, I assume living in recent years is better than 100 years ago even the life connection os less but it is easy to take a lot of access that not available in the past. It is going to be better if people are able to use recent technology wisely and proportionally to communicate.