Posts by RYAN KNIGHT

RYAN KNIGHT

Aug 19, 2015

Student Talk / Just talking, how do you like living in your own country [8]

we always hear people express that it is more pleasant, welbeing living in some developed countries such as USA, Europe, Canada than developing countries such as China, yeah , I am a Chinese.I have been to many places. People there are more friendly, courtesy, obey the public rules, behave decently. So there is a voice that people who live in countries I mentioned above are generally have good behavior and manner than most Chinese.

However I think everybody on the world is same, is of same human nature, the different is system, political system, law items. making us diffenrent, sorted into different level or status.

I really desire to know about your opinion

RYAN KNIGHT

Aug 19, 2015

Writing Feedback / The Olympic Games still play a vital role in today's modern time - IELTS [2]

I am not really sure that if my suggestions below are correct, but in China teachers always tell students that write this kind of IELTS writing according to a fixed writing model.

paragraph 1, introduce the topic that given, such as what is Olympic Games, and what about the status aroud the world,
para 2, ideas about some people think it is important, then give your reasons generally two or three, and write two sentences separately to support your each reason.

para 3, the opinions of opposite side, such as many other hold the perspectives that..., explanation same as above,
para 4, talk about your opinion, in fact it is to rewrite the points of what you write in para 2 or 3.
note that use many different sentence forms, and use different words or phrases to express your ideas.
you won't get high marks if write like what i write above, too simple words and repeat the same words.
wish could give you some help.