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Posts by Malihong
Name: xia jing
Joined: Aug 12, 2015
Last Post: Aug 12, 2015
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From: China
School: anhui agriculture university

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Malihong   
Aug 12, 2015
Writing Feedback / People spend their whole life to pursue happiness [3]

(i feel my sentense is very ...colloquialism,thx you spend time to read. correct me if i am wrong.:)

some people think happiness is the core of life.people spend the whole life to pursue it.we working hard,hoping one day we will become a better person.we traveling around the world,to find the life style which is perfectly suit us.people believe that happiness would always waiting for us in very near future.

however, what is happiness?people will receive a million of answers if they ask a million of very different individual.a public company is the happiness for businessman,saving life is the great joy for medicine doctor,but for us,ordinary people,the happiness is have accompany with our family or friends,is to explode new things.consequently,if something is hard to define ,which mean the meaning always change from one person to another and vary among in different situations.

the second questions is,what kind of people more easier to achieve happiness,waht factors matter in getting happiness?i believe it is depends on people.some people argue that the outside environment matters the inside feeling,then,affecting the sense of happiness.there is no doubt we will be more happier when we live with lovely flower and brightly sunshine.nevertheless,in my point of view,i think the character of strong self-identity affects the sense of happiness more than outside environment.when someone could receive himself or herself completely with no questions,to admit i am not a perfect person,and i am totally fine with it,i wont blame myself when i fail if i already try my best.this kind of people can enjoy more happiness then anyone else.
Malihong   
Aug 12, 2015
Undergraduate / Visas to America - obstacle or "bump in the road," in your academic or personal life [3]

When my dad excitedly announced that we got call in for an interview which could possibly send us to America, to "live the American dream". I was only ten years old , living in a small village in Vietnam. Months later, news got back to us and our family had been given Visas to move to America.

not my mothertone,correct me if i am wrong,:)
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