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Name: Jasmine
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Last Post: Sep 28, 2015
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jasmsu   
Sep 28, 2015
Writing Feedback / Living in a big city - means more robbers and criminals around [7]

First :
People live in big cities for many reasons. There are many education opportunities, people can find jobs easier, and the overall economic level of the citizens is much higher. Furthermore, it is much more convenient and entertaining as there are many restaurants, cinemas and public parks .

Second:
However in small cities, it is much harder to study at universities as their are limited resources.
jasmsu   
Aug 20, 2015
Writing Feedback / [TOEFL] Internet provides a lot of information and it is positive [4]

the first paragraph you could change it to

I believe that the internet provides a large amount of information most of them are positive. In my opinion, the internet makes it easier for people to get information that is free faster . On the other hand, information we see on the internet are not always accurate.
jasmsu   
Aug 20, 2015
Student Talk / Just talking, how do you like living in your own country [8]

I am Taiwanese and have lived in many countries both developed and undeveloped. I feel like living countries such as my own I feel a sense of belonging to the country and I get to know the own courtesies better. However, living in countries such as the UK i find the people there somewhat class oriented meaning that they are quite proud. I used to go to a normal Public school and also a Private English School and I have noticed a big difference as how the people there approach others.
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