Undergraduate / Intellectually-rich culture and traditions such as the Scav Hunt - Why UChicago Essay [6]

I'm not sure if this is right, but I've heard that it's a no-no to talk about the actual applications in the essays. Plus, I'm pretty sure Chicago is aware that their prompts are interesting, so I would get rid of that part and instead focus on how you wish to develop creative thinking in UChicago (specifics).

I liked how you talked about what in your life developed each aspect you mentioned, but, again, speak more specifics and how certain programs or things offered on campus meet your needs for voicing your beliefs etc.

Hope it helped! I'm also applying UChic! Good luck!

p.s. please help check out my essay too

Writing Feedback / Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society [3]

Media is a two-sided sword. double-edged
The other mistakes were caught by singr7.

I like your approach and organization; however I think your answer is a bit too formulaic. Your general essay follows an effect, example, introduction to next effect style, and, in my opinion, combining some sentences, adding more commentary, and showing a bit of why these effects are important to you and society would be beneficial to both the flow and add personality.