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Name: Long Ta
Joined: Oct 8, 2015
Last Post: Oct 8, 2015
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From: Viet Nam
School: Thai Nguyen Gifted High School

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ryanta   
Oct 8, 2015
Writing Feedback / Studying at a small university helps promote the interaction among students and learning efficiency [3]

Some students prefer to study at a large university that has several thousand students. Other students prefer studying at a small school that has only a few hundred students. Which of these two types of schools do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The question of whether to attend a big university that comprises of thousands of students or a small one that contains just a few hundred students is debatable in a lot of forums. It is commonly believed that studying at a large university will definitely be better. However, I am more in favor of enrolling for a small-sized school. The bases for my view are individual attention and friendship enhancement.

First and foremost, attending a small university which consists of solely a few hundred students will surely promote the interaction between teachers and students. For example, it is commonly seen that lecturers at small universities are able to assist their students on individuals' problems. Such is a quality that small university possesses but large schools do not. Therefore, this makes it clear why studying at a small university will absolutely be an advantage.

What is more, going to a small-sized university will certainly help increase the bonding among students due to the low ratio. For instance, there is no doubt that studying at small universities provides students with a lot of opportunities to socialize and help one another out with assignments. Accordingly, this will make students become more close-knit like a family. Hence, it is evident that attending small universities surely fosters social connection and teaches students to be full of love and care for the others.

By way of conclusion, studying at a small university which has a low ratio of student truly helps promote the interaction among students and learning efficiency. Thus, it is clear why it is always better to attend a small university. After analyzing this subject, it is predicted that the benefits of going to a small university will forever outnumber those of a large university.

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ryanta   
Oct 8, 2015
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 2 : Loneliness or Better Sense of Community [3]

Dear Clark,
I suggest that you use more transitional phrases such as: First and foremost, furthermore, what is more, second of all, by way of conclusion, therefore, hence,...

Moreover, you should state your ideas in the introduction and convey your idea more explicitly in the body part.
Best regard,
Ryan
ryanta   
Oct 8, 2015
Writing Feedback / Gaining the proper education is very prominent particularly when looking for a good job [4]

Dear Ardian,
I suggest some useful structures and word choices that you could apply to essays.
At present --> In modern days, In today's world, since the dawn of human beings
In this case, I strongly believe that I disagree --> However, from my perspective, I am strongly against this idea for two main reasons.

You should use more transitional phrases such as: First and foremost, furthermore, what is more, second of all, by way of conclusion.
Best regard,
Ryan
ryanta   
Oct 8, 2015
Writing Feedback / TOEFL Writing Independent Task: Should children be required to perform household tasks? [2]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children should not have to work or help with household tasks, their only responsibility should be to study.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.


In modern days, a large number of parents consider studying the sole way for their children to achieve success in life. It is commonly believed that children's only duty is to concentrate on their study and should not be required to perform household tasks. However, from my perspective, I am strongly against this idea. The bases for my view are empathy and independence building.

First and foremost, doing housework teaches children how to be empathetic and responsive to others. For example, it is commonly seen that children will feel the hardship of their family members through chores and could start to help their family willingly. Unfortunately, this is something that only studying cannot offer. Therefore, this makes it clear why children should always be asked to do housework instead of just studying.

The opponent of this idea might claim that studying provides all the necessary knowledge children need. While this may seem to be true at first, doing chores teaches children skills that they need to live independently. For instance, it is obvious that this will be useful at college time when children will be on their own and have to do chores themselves. Such is helpful thing that performing household tasks can provide but only studying cannot. From this, it becomes quite evident that only studying will never completely help children fulfill.

In conclusion, requiring children to work with household tasks helps enhance their empathy and independence. Hence, it is clear why the idea of children's only responsibility should be to study cannot be supported. Hopefully, all parents can guide their children to be a well-rounded person with a moderate combination of studying and performing household tasks.

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