Writing Feedback / Write a passage to show the main reason that polluting the environment and suggest some solutions [2]

Have you ever imaged that one day we will have to live in a completely polluted world. It would be such an unhealthy life that our human beings and animals may die out. It is a common knowledge that out environment is gradually becoming contaminated seriously and man is the main reason. We are unconsciously destroying our surroundings for many illegal or greedy personal purposes as we do not realize that how important it is. For example, people deforest for farming or buildings, and we also hunt scarce animals and the others just for jewlries, clothing, so on while they provide us with fresh air that is the most indispensable necessity, food, water,... It leads to that animals that are innocent are also put up with the consequence we are making. Human beings are slowly ruining our life by raising various disasters that makes our future in danger. Thus, a solution to deal with this emergent issue is very necessary. Everyone just need a small action to prevent our environment from being spoilt. For example, we can reduce the amount of garbage by recycling, reusing things or avoid throwing them into the environment; riding a bike or walking instead of riding a motorbike, driving a car is the best way for us to cut down on the quantity of exhaust fumes,... What is important is that we are together protecting our world. To conclude, I would like to alarm that our world is being seriously polluted and needs to be helped.

Writing Feedback / Disadvantages of Facebook - be careful and use it 'scientifically' [3]

It is obvious that modern technology plays an indispensable role in this modern times of life and Facebook, which is widely used, is one of the most common ones. Besides its advantages such as providing worldwide information, enabling us to keep in touch with faraway relatives or old friends, ... people, especially teenagers should avoid disadvantages that Facebook brings. Firstly, a young man can easily be addicted to Facebook then he will neglect his work as he wastes time surfing Facebook. Consequently, his routine life will also be badly influenced. On the other hand, numerous users take unfair advantage of privacy and freedom on this network to spread bad news or fake profiles and ID and so on, which can destroy people's knowledge and characters, as a result, they, particularly who are too young to use Facebook moderately, may get into social evils. Moreover, sitting in front of a computer hourly is really harmful to your health, causes illness and poor eyesight, which may leave you behind on all fields of life, your study, your job, your knowledge,... It is undeniable that using Facebook gives you abundant help, but you had better use it scientifically.To conclude, I would like to advise you to watch out while using Facebook.