Writing Feedback / A company want to build a big factory near your community. Do you agree or disagree? -TOEFL essay - [6]

It has been said "You are free to do anything, unless you hurt somebody". Doing anything is not a problem, but the problem hides in the consequences and the influences of that act. Right brothers always wished to fly from a mountain or a building. This wish was not such an issue. The issue that if they did so, they would die. Here in that situation, a factory in my community will be like putting the gas beside the fire. Building a large factory near my community will cause many terrible, horrible problems.

I live in an enormous city. It's very crowded. It has a population of over fifteen million people. It's also not organized well. Like all big cities, Buildings are everywhere without leaving much space for Green areas, trees or parks. The traffic is a nightmare. One day, my dad stuck four hours in a trip usually takes half an hour.

The advantages of building a -large- factory in a community like mine is considered tiny compared to the disadvantages. This factory will provide us with a fast, cheap source of goods if it produce goods we can use like groceries. It will also offer some jobs. It will benefit the country with the exports and sales.

On the other hand, it has many disadvantages. Firstly, this factory needs workers. These workers need to live near where they work. That will make it more crowded in the houses and traffic. From the environmental perspective, the factory will cause more pollution -especially when there is no much green areas-.

To recap, I oppose building this factory because it will hurt us -the people who live around- and this will not be fair.