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Write a brief statement outlining your personal and academic goals [5]
Thanks guys for the review on my essay. Below is a new version I have come up with.
Becoming a figure of hope and a role model to others in my deprived community has always been my long-term personal goal. As an ambitious journalist, my goal is to disseminate information that will create civic awareness and serve as an avenue for liberating the vulnerable and innocent in my community. Obtaining a Bachelor's degree and studying at ** University will allow me to gain the required competence, develop my intellectual capacities and interpersonal skills in order to satisfy my goals. Undergraduate /
Write a brief statement outlining your personal and academic goals [5]
Hi, please I want a review on my essay.
Prompt: Write a brief statement outlining your personal and academic goals (100-word maximumGoal differs with respect to humanity. Everyone has his/her ambitions and tries to work hard before such goals could be achieved. My long-term personal goal is to become a prominent figure that will serve as role model to others in my underprivileged community. Academically, my goal is to become a journalist who will disseminate information that will create civic awareness and serve as an avenue for liberating the vulnerable and innocent in my community. Thus, studying at ***** University will allow me to gain the required competence, develop my intellectual capacities and interpersonal skills so as to satisfy my goals.
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