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andrisaputra3

Dec 31, 2015

Graduate / To finish my career goal, I choose Marshall Business School as a start in the profession - USC essay [7]

I record every sum of money that I have spent and I have earned and ~~classify~~ clarified them to different categories since I was young.

andrisaputra3

Dec 31, 2015

Undergraduate / Picking oranges - Common App Essay (transition from childhood to adulthood) HELP [4]

It was the 1st grade and I had just told my best friendthat my family was planning a big move.
eight years-old. You dont neet to use dash(-) between years and old. It is supposed to be eight years old. Or you could say I was an eight-year-old boy.

andrisaputra3

Dec 11, 2015

Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 1 : The Number of Books Read by Different Genders At Burnay Public LIbrary [3]

Hello guys. I am a new bee in IELTS writing task 1. Right now I'm still learning how to write an introduction paragraph of writing IELTS task 1.

The line graph gives information about how many books read by male and female at Burnary Public Library over four-year period as indicated on the x-axis. The y-axis shows the number of books read from 2000 books to 16000 books. According to the legend for men is described by the green line and for men a blue one.