josekada
Dec 18, 2015
Undergraduate / I don't know what to study but won't worry - Boston Uni. can offer me some interdisciplinary courses [4]
You have touched on the specific reason that led you to apply, but I just feel you need to elaborate more on why Boston would be a good fit for you. Just mentioning the fact that its location suits your needs is insufficient.
Have a look at their website and some forums. Find some other aspects eg style of teaching or opportunities for XYZ that would interest you. Even if they don't, find a way of meaningfully incorporating them into your reasons for joining. Right now your knowledge would seem only superficial to an admissions officer. You need to show them you really have done your research.
Of course, dont try to include any information. Make sure you can elaborate on it and that it pertains to you in some way.
Dont use abbreviations, and try using some point other than the mature transportation system to say why you would feel at home in the campus. Again, it just feels like you have picked up a random point and feebly tried to use it as the basis for why Boston would be a good fit.
Also, you cant be filled with a feeling of urban life. you could say the efficient transport and the xyz layout of the campus reminded me of the urban life that I live in china- one that I have become accustomed to.
remember your visit there and add some strong points.
good luck!!!
You have touched on the specific reason that led you to apply, but I just feel you need to elaborate more on why Boston would be a good fit for you. Just mentioning the fact that its location suits your needs is insufficient.
Have a look at their website and some forums. Find some other aspects eg style of teaching or opportunities for XYZ that would interest you. Even if they don't, find a way of meaningfully incorporating them into your reasons for joining. Right now your knowledge would seem only superficial to an admissions officer. You need to show them you really have done your research.
Of course, dont try to include any information. Make sure you can elaborate on it and that it pertains to you in some way.
Dont use abbreviations, and try using some point other than the mature transportation system to say why you would feel at home in the campus. Again, it just feels like you have picked up a random point and feebly tried to use it as the basis for why Boston would be a good fit.
Also, you cant be filled with a feeling of urban life. you could say the efficient transport and the xyz layout of the campus reminded me of the urban life that I live in china- one that I have become accustomed to.
remember your visit there and add some strong points.
good luck!!!
