ch017
Jan 1, 2016
Writing Feedback / IELTS: By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. [3]
I have tried to edit your essay for you:
Thousands of people around the world are murderedby another human beings and this number is soaring rather than declining.
they are guilty of murdering or not and should be given second chance to change themselves.
I have tried to edit your essay for you:
Thousands of people around the world are murdered
they are guilty of murdering or not and should be given second chance to change themselves.