fardan10
Apr 2, 2016
Writing Feedback / What majors should university's student enroll? [2]
Hi friends, let me to respond you writing:
In sum, I extremely believe that it is more essential [...] choice for their career in the future.
My Suggestion:
To sum it up, Although the development of science and technology are of more chance than others for better career, involving in subjects which students are interested will lead them to be suceess. I firmly believe that students will be reach the bright future horizons by his choices which are relexed for them.
(in my personal argument, it is better to make a review of whole your essay in cunclusion before you emphasise your own opinion)
Nevertheless, wecan't cannot deny this phenomenon (it is crucial in writing to not use contraction )
Hi friends, let me to respond you writing:
In sum, I extremely believe that it is more essential [...] choice for their career in the future.
My Suggestion:
To sum it up, Although the development of science and technology are of more chance than others for better career, involving in subjects which students are interested will lead them to be suceess. I firmly believe that students will be reach the bright future horizons by his choices which are relexed for them.
(in my personal argument, it is better to make a review of whole your essay in cunclusion before you emphasise your own opinion)
Nevertheless, we