Writing Feedback / Would you rather be a leader or a member of a group? Leaders also learn a lot / experience asset [2]

In my opinion, there are many benefits of being a leader. So I would be a leader when I have chance to choose one of options: be a leader or be a member of a group. Leaders not only do many things but also learn a lot. In addition, experience of being a leader can be a precious asset for one's career.

Generally leaders think and put much more things into practice than any other members of a group. They should find solutions, make orders and interact with other teammate nicely and professionally. Leaders have a big burden to lead the way and improve teamwork. For example, I was a leader of article writing club and I had to edit every single article from all members and sometimes force them to submit their articles on time. I was very stressful and burdensome, but I learned a lot.

Another thing of benefits from being a leader is to strengthen your profile. Leadership experience is usually considered as a precious asset. It helps a lot when applying for graduate school or any firms in the future. For instance, when I applied for a company and went to an interview session, I gave positive impact on interviewers because of leadership experience. Owing to the leadership experience, I could get a job successfully.

In conclusion, there are many benefits of being a leader. Leaders can learn a lot while doing a lot. And leaders can have a good profile because many people think leadership experience is a good experience. Therefore, I will definitely a leader if I have an opportunity to select either a leader or a member.

Writing Feedback / These days young people are less reliant on their parent's advice to make important life decisions. [4]

I strongly agree that these days young people are more independent on their parent's advice to make important life decisions. In my opinion, young people have become less reliant on their parent's advice because of the two reasons: spending more time alone and access to internet platform.

Nowadays individualism has become more popular and many young people don't live with their family. They spend a lot of time alone. They read a book, play games, and study in the library. Especially in South Korea, many young people have few opportunities to talk with their family because they need to prepare university entrance exam or interview session to get a job. They tend to make their decision based on their own thoughts.

Internet access is one of the other reasons that young people don't listen to their parent's advice. There are almost no young people who are't familiar with internet. When they have any questions or doubts, it is very easy for them to search and get answers through internet. It just takes a few minutes to find advice because there are many unanimous volunteers on the internet who are willing to give their advice and opinions. Their advice and opinion have huge impact on young people's decision.

In conclusion, it is really common phenomenon that nowadays many young people are less reliant on their parent's advice to make important life descision. Young people tend to live alone and think alone because of their busy life and strengthened individualism. Moreover many young people can find advice from people through the internet.