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Aug 10, 2016
Graduate / How my town takes care of the environment [4]
Hello Krishansharma198,
the topic is beautiful and I presume it has to be written about the things you are doing differently than others, I noted the second para spoke about the problems with people using plastic bags.
You can talk about
1. organic farming
2. use of public transport
3. older vehicles not used.
4. people prefer walking.
5. focus on cleaning.
6. lesser use of fertilizers etc
changes-
People needs could change to people need. or may be instead of first sentence write " A clean environment is desired for a healthy life."
Hello Krishansharma198,
the topic is beautiful and I presume it has to be written about the things you are doing differently than others, I noted the second para spoke about the problems with people using plastic bags.
You can talk about
1. organic farming
2. use of public transport
3. older vehicles not used.
4. people prefer walking.
5. focus on cleaning.
6. lesser use of fertilizers etc
changes-
People needs could change to people need. or may be instead of first sentence write " A clean environment is desired for a healthy life."