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Name: alfadmishal
Joined: Aug 15, 2016
Last Post: Aug 28, 2016
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alfadmishal20   
Aug 28, 2016
Writing Feedback / Should parents give their children any social knowledge? Or they will get it just in school? [2]

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society, other, however, believe that school is the place to leant this.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


In modern era some people think that parents are responsible to give their kids knowledge about society. This statement is true because the basic ability on children is from parents lessons. However, other place that young generation most to visit is school, so school also have to improve children's ability in social community.

First of all, it is essential for parents to make sure their children have a good social skill in daily life. In leisure time, especially on weekend often parents want to relax at home , but they need to realize that weekend is the best moment for parents to teach their kids. For example, if one of children in school have a birthday party, they kids should come to the party. Many ways for parents to develop children's social ability. It is awful for parents if they know their children is not good in social community.

On the other hand, school also important to lookout their student improvement. Many activities that student can participate. School should give priorities of social community knowledge. For instance, all student need to join the boys scout because there are a lot of thing that student will learn in boys scout activities, also will improve their problem-solving skill. Teacher should give a lesson about solving the problem in positive ways.

In conclusion, both of them, parents and school are the entry level of knowledge for children. it is better if parents and teachers have coordinate about student problems. So , they can develop their kids social ability in positive ways.
alfadmishal20   
Aug 28, 2016
Writing Feedback / "green movement" - What is Ecotourism ? (Interesting tourism) [6]

there are some similar words that you can use on your next essay, good luck aris.

... "green movement" that have meaning to preserve the natural environment(nature) .

The goals not only avoid harming theenvironment Nature but also give ...

... friendly accommodations such us as renewable resources ...

... they produce not only a harmfull emm isions but also many tons...

... although not all the companies practice the principle/value .

... practice the ecotourism principle/code .

... indication of ecotourism development/improvement .
alfadmishal20   
Aug 17, 2016
Writing Feedback / Modern form of communication could be negative for us ?? [4]

In the past 10 Years, People in the world have improved their communication levels, which make them easier to keep in touch with friends. Some people may think because of the social media people reduce the amount of time seeing their friends. My opinion , social media could be advantage for people to meet friends more often.

First, the advantage of social media such as facebook, intagram and email is to enable people know their friends more easily than the time before and also to know their activities. For example, when some people want to do something new like hobby, but we want to do it together with friends, people could search in social media, hopelly will find frinds with the same interest.

Another positive aspect of social media is to let you meet friends in some places, even friends that you never meet for a long time. For instance, friends in junior high school who saperate, it is possible with the social media that someday people will meet together, because of their posts to the social media, people will know that they are in the same area.

In conclusion, social media help people to know each other better than before, but some people think itu will reduce the number of seeing friends, it is not because the social media, it just on people mind.
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