Unanswered [12] | Urgent [0]
  

Posts by faizahadina [Suspended]
Name: Faiz Ahadina
Joined: Sep 15, 2016
Last Post: Sep 16, 2016
Threads: 2
Posts: 2  
Likes:
From: Indonesia
School: Tanri Abeng University

Displayed posts: 4
sort: Latest first   Oldest first  | 
faizahadina   
Sep 16, 2016
Writing Feedback / Recent studies report that the level of people's stress and obesity increased in the last decades. [6]

EILTS Summary 1 - Uses of Leisure Time

Recent studies report that the level of people's stress and obesity increase than last decades. It reveals that most people do not wisely use their pastime to rejuvenate their body and mind. Usually, going to the natural environment is likely a good idea to recharge our energy after hectic work schedule in the big city.

In addition, scholars keenly agree to spend the holiday in the country will help increasing concentration, stabilizing emotions as well as impulses. Especially for the children, that can help to cut the level of street and obesity, both are caused lack of mingling with people around. The government is aware to overcome such crucial problem. Therefore, they have created interested programs to actively engage children with natural surroundings.

It could be concluded that people living in the big city might have unstable emotion and life under pressure. Thus, they are required to realize the importance of spending vacation time days in the natural environment.

note: please kindly to comment followed by clear explanation. Thank you
faizahadina   
Sep 16, 2016
Writing Feedback / Writing Task 1 Student Cambridge Books [2]

... of forty books from 100 books which is read by girls, while booksare read by boys has dropped ...
faizahadina   
Sep 15, 2016
Writing Feedback / When people focus on one particular object, they automatically do not notice anything else [2]

Peripheral Vision in Sports

When people focus on one particular object, they automatically do not notice to anything else. Whereas, it gives importance insight of what is going on in human activities. Athletes surely understand that strong muscles without visual ability, it is like bird without wings. The balance between two of them impact on athlete's performance into the game. They are required fast physical maneuvers and visual abilities, having coordinated movement for all bodies. On average human is blinking 25 times per minute, and increasing on anxious condition. Such condition would be a problem for athlete, in order to reduce it, more training and practice would help much.
Do You Need
Writing
or Editing Help?
Fill in one of the forms below to get professional help with your assignments:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳