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Posts by Ucha MSN
Name: SMAN 21 MAKASSAR
Joined: Sep 26, 2016
Last Post: Nov 10, 2016
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From: Indonesia
School: SMA

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Ucha MSN   
Sep 27, 2016
Writing Feedback / Make People Listen To Our Speak [2]

Most of people always speak without having meaningfulness and powerfulness. Some habits people need to move away from their speaking. Those things are pretty large deadly sins of speaking that most of us can fall into. First is gossiping. Speaking about someone who's not present is an ill. Second is judging people that might hurt. Third, negativity which is just makes wasting of time. Fourth, complaining that doesn't have any quality. And the last is dogmatism. That is when someone talks about the confusion of fact with opinion. All of this must be avoided to get the positive feedback from others.

Here are some positive ways on how we draw people in our speaking. Four powerful foundation of it are abbreviated as HAIL which is has a great definition as well. Its word stands for Honesty, Authenticity, Integrity, and Love.
Ucha MSN   
Sep 27, 2016
Graduate / I want to apply for masters program in Agricultural Economics [2]

Hi Janet.. I have read your study objective. I can say you're high-motivated student. Hopefully all your aims can be true.
Now, I want to give some correction and suggestion in your writing.

My main Purpose of choosing to study ...
MY PRIMARY OBJECTIVE FOR CHOOSING AGRICULTURAL ECONOMICS STUDY PROGRAM

is to be able to apply economics principles to various issues arising in Agriculture and also to help Agriculturist in the efficient use of Resources. I decided to pursue a career in this course because I see it as a program that people don't know its worth as the population ...

I OBSERVED THAT ONLY FEW STUDENTS WERE INTERESTED TO CHOOSE THIS MAJOR.

Students overlook Agriculture and they believe that ...
STUDENTS MIGHT THINK THAT AGRICULTURE HAS LIMITED TERTIARY INSTITUTION FOR WORKING IN THE FUTURE.
Ucha MSN   
Sep 26, 2016
Writing Feedback / Butter, margarine and other spreads consumed during 26 years timeline [3]

The line graph illustrates the amount consumed of 3 spreads since 1981 until 2007.

It is noticeable that at the first butter was the most common consumption of three spreads but it decreased dramatically at the last period. However, a considerable rise can be seen in the consumption of low fat & reduced spreads.

Between 1981 and 1986, butter consumption rose from around 140 to 160 grams. In spite of 1986 until 2007, its spread had plummeted drastically to around 50 grams. On the other hand, in the figure for margarine fluctuated between 80 to 90 grams in 1981 to 2001 but it also dropped from around 85 to 40 grams in 2007.

By contrast, in 1996 low fat & reduced spreads came as a new spread and it had doubled since 2001 to approximately around 10 to 85 grams. Nevertheless, few decrement also happened in 2007 from around 85 to 70 grams.





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