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Vina12   
Sep 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / It seems that people are very thrifty in regard to expenditures on leisure and education [3]

The table shows information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries: Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey. Overall, it is evident that all five countries spend the majority of their consumer expenditure country on food/drink/tobacco and clothing/footwear. On the other hand, the percentages of consumer expenditure on leisure/education have the lowest percentages.

According to the table, out of the five countries, Turkey and Ireland had the highest percentage of consumer spending on food/drinks/tobacco respectively at 32.14% and 28.91%. Turkey also had much higher percentage of leisure/education at 4.35%, while consumer expenditure on clothing/footwear was significantly higher in Italy at 9% than in any of the other countries.

It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentage of national consumer expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, respectively 16.36% and 5.40%. Spain had slightly higher figure for this category but had the lowest figure for leisure/education at 1,98%.




Vina12   
Sep 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 1 Summary Article: Ancient Bee fosil reveals secrets of human ancestor's habitat [3]

Hi Alamsyah Ismail
I have some advice for you

- ...The Taung Child found in 1924 revolutionedrevolutionized our view of human origins.
- ...the remains of [the] small cavern as the rocks containing the skull...
- ...all other south African hominishominids come from cave sediment formed within aan ilk of limestones, Precambrian
- The conclutionconclusion said that it raises hope of future fossil...
- The search for more hominin fossisfossils has focused on...

Thankyou
Hope this will be helpful :)
Vina12   
Sep 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / How to start a movement in public area by Derek Sivers. [3]

Hi ryan31
I have some advice for you

- This essay will discuss about how to start [a] movement....
- In the beginning[,] there is no one follow his movement....
- ....leadership is not as long as needed for mobilizemobilizing other people.
- ... tourists which do not makes any move....
- Indirectly, it is makes amongst people join...

Thankyou
Hope this will be helpful :)
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