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How to start a movement in public area by Derek Sivers.


ryan31 65 / 96 15  
Sep 29, 2016   #1
This essay will discuss about how to start movement in public area and it is delivered by derek sivers. He explained with a video which shows about one person stood with annoying gestures. After that, slowly one person follow him to dance in that area. In the beginning there is no one follow his movement until almost all of tourist following that gestures. It is noticeable that, leadership is not as long as needed for mobilize other people.

On the other hand, there are several tourists which do not makes any move because they think it is annoying movements. Indirectly, it is makes amongst people join with this event to express their feeling and finally with a little crazy on a leadership from one person makes people start to movements.
Vina12 1 / 2  
Sep 29, 2016   #2
Hi ryan31
I have some advice for you

- This essay will discuss about how to start [a] movement....
- In the beginning[,] there is no one follow his movement....
- ....leadership is not as long as needed for mobilizemobilizing other people.
- ... tourists which do not makes any move....
- Indirectly, it is makes amongst people join...

Thankyou
Hope this will be helpful :)
justivy03 - / 2,366 607  
Sep 29, 2016   #3
Hi Riandi, please find additional help from my end;

- This summary essay will discuss
- about how to start a movement
- in a public area
- and it is delivered by D erek S ivers.
- He explained it with a video thatwhich shows
- about one person stoodstanding with annoying gestures.
- After that, slowly one person slowly follow
- In the beginning there is no one follownobody followed his movement until almost
- all of tourist followingfollowed that gestures .
- leadership is not as long asnecessarily needed forto mobilize other people.

There you have it Riandi, as always, I have left the last paragraph for you to be able to practice editing it yourself and following through the above remarks and suggestions. For future writing reference, mind your linking verbs, try to be comfortable writing and including them in your sentences, this verbs help a lot in creating a complete sentence.


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