Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 2: The roles of computers in the modern life [4]

"As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replaced more and more jobs. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem that may result."

In recent years, the world is more and more modern, computers are used widely to replace human in many fields such as accounting, management, scheduling,etc. but one of the typical cases i want to mention is using computers in order to operate the system. That brings a lot of obvious advantages, there are some disadvantages as well.

I believe there are three main advantages. First of all, the computers always work with the same efficient without being influenced by any conditions that the human can be made like bad healthy, hot weather, cool weather. Second, using computers to instate human activity will raise productivity, computers will control the system's operation following what people set up. Unless any computers, there need a lot of people to operate the system, when using computers, the job just need a person to control the computers which operate the system. Finally, it is very ideal for using computers replaces human to work at grave-shift. If people work over night for a long time, they will get sick and it is not happen when they use computers.

However, that also exists a few disadvantages. In my view, when appearing any troubles, computers can never treat. And those will not realize the problem to stop the system. Also, working on computers to control the system is needing a highly advanced technique and combination with knowledgeable in information technology. Beside, in my opinion, the biggest problem is that there are a lot of unemployments in many under-developed and large population countries. If every company uses computers to replace human activities, it is a big dangerous for unskilled worker class. And the society's vices will be more popular when existing so much unemployment.

Therefore, I think the advantages of using computers to instate some job positions are greater than the disadvantages. If this advance is widely common to the firms, the productivity may rise the profit, there is also country's revenue and improves human's life. Beside that, government should considerate on trainings to the unskilled worker class to be better and get the good jobs.

Writing Feedback / Choosing between living in a small village and a larger city. [3]

In the past, most people lived in the small villages. And now people tend to live in the larger cities. However, each style of life experienced a lot of different advantages and disadvantages.

I think there were three main reasons to live in the small villages. Firstly, people lived in there would be beside their family, they had many chances to speak to their relatives, owned a lot of time for caring each other. Secondly, the cost of life in the small villages was pretty cheap. So the inhabitants would not think too much for their living, they did not need to do much for earning money, but still enjoyed their relaxed life. Finally, their children maybe live in a safer enviroment with less society's vices. They would not scare their children getting bad people. And the country enviroment helped them develop their ability safely.

Other, there were too much existing disadvantages. I believe when people grew up in a limited enviroment, they would have less chance for developing themselves. It was too hard for them to get new technology and information. Nextly, people communicated with few people, they could not exchange useful knowlegde, and their brain had less active. However, in my view, the biggest problem was significantly shortage of facility. There were just little facility such as: school, hospital,... So, people usually had a big problem when getting sick; when they were accepted entering universities which were only popular in the big cities; or restriction of instrument experiment, computer; and led to praticing ability was bad, everything just based on theory.

In my oppinion, the advantages of the life in a small village was less than larger city. It was possible to bring the peaceful life to them, but there was too few chance for developing their ability. And people could find out those in the larger cities.