Writing Feedback / There are many troubles people can get when move to a new country [3]

Topic: The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information about the difficulties people have when they come to live in foreign countries. There are differences about the percentage when comparing among age groups.

The highest column in chart is the problem in learning the local language of old people over 55. It takes more than 50 percent while there is only 36 percent of people aged 35 to 54 suffering from the similar problem. It seem that the number of people who have difficulties in learning the new language decreases according to the age. In fact, the bar corresponding to the youngest people is the lowest (nearly 30 percent).

Although it is difficult to learn the local language, the old group finds it easy to get along with friends. As consequence, this is the group that have the least difficulties in forming friendships, at 23 percent. However, more than 40 percent of the young people feel it hard to become a friend of local people.

Similar to their ability of creating a relationship easily, only 22 percent of people in the oldest group worry about finding an ideal house to live. However, it seems not to be lucky to the other two age groups with 39 to 40 percent of people in finding somewhere to live.

Overall, there are many troubles people can get when move to a new country, but the old people often feel language learning the most difficult while the young people find it difficult to make friends.

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  resource: Cambridge English Complete IELTS Bands 5.5 - 6.5
  

Writing Feedback / Every country should develop tourism more, as well as enhance management [3]

Topic: Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists can do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?

Tourism is a smokeless industry which brings many benefits to countries, especially developing countries which can earn much money for their economy. However, when the number of travel companies increase sharply without strict management, this can cause many disadvantages on the destinations of tourists.

In my view, large number of travellers who visit the area of beauty at the same time may cause the lack of accomodations and good services. After that, increasing the price of hotels and restaurants can happen. Local people also have to pay similarly if they go there. Moreover, the appearance of buildings to serve tourist can change the nature of places to visit.

Another negative effect is that tourists do not care about environment pollution. Someone smoke and litter although they can find the trash bin easily. Another even write their names on tree or building to prove that they visited here. However, these environmental issues and noise pollution can be worrying for the locals.

In fact, there are many possitive things that visitors can do. They should find information of their destination and avoid visiting there at the time when it is overcrowded. Travellers also protect the environment, respect the culture of the country that they visit and observe the rules there.

Overall, every countries should develop tourism more as well as enhance management. It is important to protect the tourist areas and reduce the adverse impacts of tourist behaviour. Development combined with effective protection can profit sustainably.