randompenguin
Oct 14, 2016
Undergraduate / A free ticket? Does not that sound inspiring? Trip to the capital of the Empire State of Mind [2]
The content is okay and answers the prompt. To conclude the essay, you could summarize what do you plan to do in New York City: basically list down everything that you want to do in a quick sentence. I do not see much errors in punctuation and word choice.
The content is okay and answers the prompt. To conclude the essay, you could summarize what do you plan to do in New York City: basically list down everything that you want to do in a quick sentence. I do not see much errors in punctuation and word choice.