Letters / 'Good connection with others' - Write a letter of application to the tourism office [9]

Hi @justivy03
I studied english before , and nowadays I've been studying english again. these days I am improving my 4 skills in English nowadays.
here , I'm trying writting, because I study English self study .
thanks for your attention , and here I'll send you another writting that I wrote about title which you said.
thank you very much for your helping.
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I want tell you about my childhood, and hope you will help me and correct my mistakes. Thanks for your attention.
I really like my childhood and have a lot diary which I can't forget them. Now I want to say about some of those diary.

When I was a child I have a lot of friends whom they lived near my home. Most of the time we played a lot of games. Forexample we made ballons and released them in sky, when it went to sky then all of us shrilled to show we were happy.

One of my friends had bought chalkboard, we gathered to her home and wrote on it with chalk or we colored pictures in coloring book with crayons.

When the weather wasn't good we couln't stay in yard or alley so we went to my room and made crafts, because all of us liked artistic activities, so when the weather became good we went to alley and did firework or made beautiful things out of clay likes mugs,plates and bowls.

We had a lot of funny and unforgettable days with my friends . after some years we left the neighbourhood and I haven't seen my friends at all. I've missed my friends and I hope I see them again.

I've missed all the days which I had with them.

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Letters / 'Good connection with others' - Write a letter of application to the tourism office [9]

hi @justivy03
thanks for your attention .
for first step, could you give me tittle that I'll write about it ?

Letters / 'Good connection with others' - Write a letter of application to the tourism office [9]

thamk everybody for your help. :))