LinhArs
Oct 28, 2016
Writing Feedback / There's a good effect of having business suit but the value of performance in job is most important [3]
I have some ideas for your writing
(in every they do work activities) => in everything they do
(for instance, a teller bank) => a teller bank is an example
(costumers) => customers
(as well) => well
(They not need ) => they do not need
I hope that useful for you =)))
I have some ideas for your writing
(in every they do work activities) => in everything they do
(for instance, a teller bank) => a teller bank is an example
(costumers) => customers
(as well) => well
(They not need ) => they do not need
I hope that useful for you =)))
