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Posts by Ruslan55
Name: Ruslan Azimbaev
Joined: Oct 20, 2016
Last Post: Oct 27, 2016
Threads: 3
Posts: 12  
From: Russian Federation
School: Tongji University

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Ruslan55   
Oct 26, 2016
Scholarship / Chevening scholarship, I'm stuck at some problems in my application ... [5]

Hello,

you need to write about your plans, vision and skills.
Leadership: it is not clear, but as I understood after reading hundrends of them, you have to prove why you are a leader. descrive some real situation and give an example how will you use your skills to make Chevening Community better

Network: describe that you know how to get right connections and get benefit from them. how are you going to use all the contacts you may have in the UK

Career: tell what are your 5 and 10 years plans. What do you want to achieve and how
Study: why do you choose them? why is it important for you to go there? Why is it important to go now? What is so unique about this program?

Feel free to search and read other people's essays
Ruslan55   
Oct 26, 2016
Scholarship / Russia and China relationship. Career plan, Chevening. Feel free to comment, very nice of you all [4]

Hello,
here is my essay for the chevening. Two are done, and I am satisfied with end result, as your comments made them only better!

Relationship between Russia and China reminds me a bridge, which is being constructed from the two sides of the river. Both countries are making great steps to get closer, but nothing is useful without supporting framework. I want to become this kind of the framework.

My short career plan for nearest 3-5 years is very clear. I plan to work for one of the International Business Consulting companies. I believe, after I finish my Master courses in the UK, I will have the required knowledge and skills. I want to focus mostly on business negotiations and lobbying Russian interests. I plan to get a promotion in 3 years and become a head of the department, my educational and work background, my network and leadership skills are making it realistic. Here I need to mention, that I plan to help Russian companies to enter Chinese market, however, I will mostly focus on attracting Chinese companies in Russia, as Russian Economy needs investments. For now most of the Chinese companies are trying to work on the European part of Russia, however, there are several problems to be solved: Chinese companies want to invest mostly in strategic industries, like electricity and water supply, agriculture and real estate and that meets a lot of misunderstanding and even paranoia from the people, which is obvious as many projects are signed to get the short-term profit rather than long-term. I plan to redirect the interest of Chinese companies from the European part to other parts of Russia and make them work within the innovation industry. This is required as Russia has a large research potential, however, researches leave country for better conditions. Attracting Chinese companies will let us create better conditions for researchers and Chinese companies will reduce their R&D costs. I believe, that my knowledge will let receive more mutually beneficial investments with minimum side effects.

In 10 years I see myself as a professional in business consulting and working with China. That will allow me to work independently or start my own business. I believe my experience would be useful not only in Russia, but in any country, as Chinese companies are one of most active investors in the world. However, my main goal is to work with the Government for the optimization of the current business conditions and supporting Russian part of New Silk Way project. I believe that if the project wold be realized correctly Russia can become a bridge, which connects the EU, the UK and China.

In the end, I want to tell, that one of my key-dreams is to share my knowledge and experience with others and follow in father's footsteps and become a professor. So I would love to run some open courses about Chinese business and management in 10-15 years.
Ruslan55   
Oct 24, 2016
Scholarship / Leadership is a skill that can be developed through life experiences. Essay for Chevening [4]

Sorry for the late reply!
Yes, I think you should totally focused on it, as they do not ask you how do you understand leadership or what is it. They wantyou to show clear examples, so you can say what calls you had and how you faced them, how you inspired and led people, even if they refused in the beginning. So better focus on 2-3 detailed examplesfrom your past and give some common idea how you would use leading skill in Chevening Community.

Good luck and hope we can meet next year as Cheveners
Ruslan55   
Oct 24, 2016
Scholarship / My study in China; Chevening network question. Would be honoured, if you comment and help [8]

here is my draft again.
Fadhill, thank you for helpig me!
Giansy and Kareem thank you for the ideas and suggestions!
Radja, you helped me a lot with finding little details

My intention to continue studying in China began as a result of my network with university. Years ago, I helped some of Chinese students while they were in Moscow. When my purpose was purely to support them, they offered me help by submitting my application to their university for master degrees. At that moment, I just realized of benefit of networking which is commonly applied in Chinese culture. Consequently, I have to be familiar with Chinese community from bottom to the top. In China it is called "guanxi", the network of people, who can help you and whom you can help. As the system is built throughout your entire life, you can afford the benefits either instantly or years later. Therefore I have enhanced this skill, which includes learning how to talk, act and think to get along with them better. I have been visiting all the Russian-Chinese business meetings held by Russian Trade Delegation and established connections with many people working in China. As a result I was responsible for the connections with Chinese side during the last China International Industry Fair, which is obliviously, flattered me.

Now I can say, I am very close with Chinese society and know people with absolutely different backgrounds. I even had to start a notebook with their names, so I would be sure I do not forget any important dates, as this is crucial in China. Later with the help of my Chinese friends I got close with my university department supervisors and with their support international student association was founded, which now includes all the foreigners of our university and guides them in any situation. That helped me to meet and know people, who dream to work with China. I have already helped some of them with internships and contacts and I believe that soon we may meet as business partners.

At the same time, most of the Chinese top managers and decision makers have studied abroad, especially in the UK. That is one of the reasons why I want to join Chevening community, I believe, I can meet Chinese students, who study now in the UK and make them a part of my network, as most of them will become top managers and important decision makers. I believe that I would be one of those, who really understand their business culture and become a "bridge" between them and other foreigners. Also I believe that my existing network connections and experience will let me help and guide those, who only in the beginning of their work with Chinese companies, as that has a lot of pitfalls and tricks to learn. I am always happy to share my knowledge and sure that would be helpful for all Chenevers, as mostly every country in the world works with China, however, not all of them know how to do it effectively.
Ruslan55   
Oct 24, 2016
Scholarship / "Leadership is intended to serve others in the area of our giftedness". Chevening essay [3]

Dear
you have great experience and you should show it as being teacher is one the most important ( and difficult) jobs in the world.
What if you try to show what exactly you did on this position? how did you help students, lead them and helped to overcome difficulties? May be you should try to give examples and focus on a real situation and discribe how your leadership skill helped in it/
Ruslan55   
Oct 24, 2016
Writing Feedback / Some claim that computer games are beneficial for children, while others don't share this opinion [3]

Dear Gian,
from the beginning I am not sure what the main goal of the article is. The same feeling I have about the conclusion. Could you specify the main idea of the article and the topic?

Based on that, may be you should try to go deeper? For example, add some statistic or questionaire results to show why one or another side has this opinion as for now it is too briefly
Ruslan55   
Oct 23, 2016
Scholarship / My study in China; Chevening network question. Would be honoured, if you comment and help [8]

Hello, friends. I am applying for Chevening and doing that thousands are doing now.
Hope, you can help me as I need some fresh view. Last time your comments helped me to improve my essay. I believe, this time you can help me too. I must admit I am not really sure what do they want us to show here.

My study in China is literately a result of networking. Years ago I helped Chinese students to adapt in Moscow, just because I wanted to make their life easier and when I was choosing the university in China, one of them helped me with applying to his own university for master courses. That moment I realized that networking takes an important role in the Chinese culture, so I understood that I need to enter every level of the closed Chinese community. In China It is called "guanxi", the network of people, who can help you and whom you can help. That system is built during all your life and you can benefit from it either instantly or years later. I have to enhance this skill from day to day. I had to learn how to talk, act and think to know them better. Now I am very close with Chinese society and know people with absolutely different backgrounds. I even had to start notebook with their names, so I would be sure I do not forget any important date, as this is crucial in China. Later with the help of my Chinese friends I got close with my university department supervisors and with their support international student association was founded, which now includes all the foreigners of our university and guides them in any situation. That helped me to meet and know people, who dreams to work with China. I believe that soon we may meet as business partners. I have already helped some of them with internships and contacts.

At the same time most of the Chinese top managers and decision makers have studied abroad, especially in the UK. That is one of the reasons why I want to join Chevening community, I believe, I can meet Chinese students, who study now in the UK and make them a part of my network, as most of them will become top managers and important decision makers. And according to my experience in China knowing right people in any Chinese related business allows you to achieve your goals faster.

I believe that my existing network connections and experience will let me help and guide those, who only in the beginning of their work with Chinese companies, as that has a lot of pitfalls and tricks to learn.
Ruslan55   
Oct 20, 2016
Scholarship / Leadership is a skill that can be developed through life experiences. Essay for Chevening [4]

Hello
You have a great experience, but I have found it only when I started to read your essay the 3rd time as they all are shown too briefly.

I feel like it is too common in the beginning. Imagine yourself reading hundreds of essays and try to understand what parts you will just miss without reading and what parts will make you stop and read carefully.
Ruslan55   
Oct 20, 2016
Scholarship / This my essay for Chevening scholarship about Leadership and influence... [3]

Hi, I am writing the same essay. You can see it.
I feel like yours are quite...short. Why dont you try go deeper and show what exactly you did and how that worked. Try to sell your essay to the people.Read the essays which are posted here, that should help you.

There are some grammar mistakes, if I am not mistaken, but as I am not native speaker I leave this to others.
Ruslan55   
Oct 20, 2016
Scholarship / Chevening Leadership and Influence Question. Have a look, it would be very very nice of you. [5]

Thank you for the quick comment. May be I spent too much time editing right for wrong? xD I will check the meaning of the word "leader" one more time to understand it even better, as I understood, changing "team" for "me" wont help. However, I need to mention that I understood "leader" as a part of the team, who helps it to achieve team goals, not personal one, as without team there is no leader. How do you think if that idea worths for that chevening question?
Ruslan55   
Oct 20, 2016
Scholarship / Chevening Leadership and Influence Question. Have a look, it would be very very nice of you. [5]

Hello, everyone. I know, there are a lot of people posting the same about the same scholarship. Hope, you have time and energy to read mine!

I spent days writing and editing the essay and finally found this source.

Chevening is looking for individuals that will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to support your answer.

I've never wanted to be a leader. I've always thought that was someone else's duty - know the way, go the way and show the way. I was the youngest boy among my friends and in my class too. I've always thought there was someone who was elder smarter and better than me. I was wrong.

I didn't change my mind instantly. In many projects I was involved in I saw that people didn't want to take any responsibility. No one took a risk and no one knows the best. So people followed the most ambition ones, who were not always right. I didn't like it and after all felt I was wasting my time. I even thought to leave my study and that time my father told me: "If you don't like the options you have, create your own one".

He inspired me. Instead of complaining, I started to change what I didn't like. Leader is a team, so in my university I started to spend more time with people who were out of the crowd and could think different. Leader equals to team's experience. So we started to share our ideas and tried to find a way, how to make them real. Leader is ready to change anything. So were we. We didn't like that we study Chinese language using texts and vocabulary, which were dead already. We wanted to study modern Chinese language with hot topics and have real discussion with real people. We decided to change the format of Chinese language courses we had in the university. Leader is a result, which is achieved by the team. And we spent weeks to convince university let us start talk clubs and movie nights to make Chinese students and Russian students talk and make them overcome language and cultural barriers. Did we know that our idea would change to Moscow Chinese Club and people from all around Moscow join us to meet and talk? No, we didn't. We wanted to study Chinese culture better. And this idea brought us to completely new way of studying. I believe, Chinese and Russian students, who started as talk clubs members will become trustful partners in future creating connections between Russia and China. That was the first step on my way to understand I can inspire people to be better, do better and achieve goals. That helped me to run international student association when I started to study in Chinese university and that helps me to run projects during my internship in Chinese company now.

I am still asking myself if I want to lead people. And after all, I believe, I want to inspire them to choose their own way.
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