Writing Feedback / Some factors that caused Land Degradation - Table and Pie Chart [2]

Hello @ibe13, I got some suggestions for your writing:

... table illustrate (THE) information about the factors causing(CAUSED) land degradation ...

... was the most factors(WHICH MADE)make agricultural less ...
The second cause is (WAS) many trees were cut down to(FOR) industry, so that 30 percent of deforestations caused ...

... deforestation was the key factors make(WHICH MADE) its land harmful ...
A large group of island in s(S) outh p(P) acific and its vicinity was(WERE) the second largest ...

Writing Feedback / A Perspective Happiness of People in Their Marriage or Single Life Over Time [4]

Hello @SarlindaDS_27, I got some suggestions for your writing:

1. The charts provide(THE) information about..
2. Additionally, all of the spouses are still keep (TO BE) happier even though(WHETHER) they have or not have next generation or children (OR NOT) .

3. But(BY CONTRAST/ON THE OTHER HAND)for people in elderly stage seems(TO BE) happier ..
4. ... in all of marriage life (DOES) not give ...

Please, pay attention in Subject Verb Agreement .. Keep writing :D