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|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Line graph: the figures for passenger railway journeys in the UK
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|QuestBridge National College Match Essay: Biography - more about myself
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|Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified
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|The proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university
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|IELTS Writing Task 1 - The line graph of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students at Sheffield University
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|Moving homes obstacle essay for common app
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|Unsupervised social media usage by youngsters is dangerous. Discuss problem & suggest solutions.
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|Drinks containing sugars have gained increasing popularity among young people
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|My three university choice on Public Relations Major (Study Plan Essay Chevening)
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|The value of one's country exports - IELTS - CAM 14
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|The possibilities for the brain - Questbridge Topical Essay - curiosity
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|Keeping 21st century wild animals safe and sound
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|The Dutch and Mexican culture - Personal Statement for GKS Undergraduate scholarship
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|Three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005
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|MS Business Analytics - Why is the next logical step? What will you gain?
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|PERSONAL STATEMENT GKS 2021 UNDERGRADUATE
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|Chevening - Leadership essay - what have I achieved as a leader
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|Plan on studying Psychology - Puestbridge Essay
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|Should young people have the obligation to volunteer for community service when they are available?
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|QUESTBRIDGE "What do you admire most about your community? What would you change?"
2 - Please remember to break up your presentation into paragraphs. It is extremely difficult to read in this format. The...
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|Chevening - Studying in UK Essay (The aim of studying is not only to obtain a scientific degree)
2 - The Chevening Scholarship will look for the connection of your current work, your past and present work experience, with...
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|GKS This scholarship will assist me greatly in my endeavors and allow me the accomplish career goals
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|WRITING TASK 2: ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF TAKING A GAP YEAR
2 - It is important for you to present a balanced discussion for the advantage and disadvantage discussion paragraphs. You would...
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|From the given line graph: how much chicken, beef, lamb and fish were consumed, by grams per person
5 - I rewrited two paraphrases for practice. In 1979, the average weekly consumption of beef per person was 200...
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|Task1: How much carbon dioxide an average person in four countries emitted into the environment
3 - Your summary overview is a run on and neglects to indicate important summary information such as: - What the...
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