|Masters in Neuroscience - Motivational letter for Neurasmus
2 - The motivational letter is going around in circles. You have missed the point of the motivational letter. It is...
GraduateHaileLeo - Nov 13, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
|What is your motivation to apply for UWC?
2 - I do not believe that you are responding to the question. You have delivered your community participation background. However,...
UndergraduateAfag Mamedova - Nov 12, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
|talking about cyberbullying the effects and what kids go through
2 - Cyberbullying is the act of bullying someone in cyberspace. It is not the place where the bullying takes...
Writing Feedbackmyra95 - Nov 12, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
|How Technology affects us
2 - The thesis paragraph has a solid base, but lacks the actual presentation of the discussion topic. That is what...
Writing FeedbackIsabellaaaa - Nov 12, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
|Motivational letter for CERN Summer Student Programme: revision ideas
2 - You do not need to mix your academic history into the motivational letter. The one thing that a motivational...
Lettersniyar - Nov 11, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
|Write a definition paragraph of about 150 words to address the following questions: What is freedom?
2 - The essay is more focused on why people want freedom as opposed to defining what freedom is. The question...
Writing Feedbackkimyun_05 - Nov 11, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
|china's one child policy has been carried out successfully
2 - 129 words is an unacceptable number of words for a task 1 presentation. It does not meet the minimum...
Writing Feedbacktuanh24 - Nov 10, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
|TASK 1 - percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities, town, rural areas
2 - Incorrect sentence structure. You are indicating that only 2 years are to be compared in the image. However,...
Writing Feedbackjackhoang - Nov 10, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
|FIT Admissions Essay - Undergraduate - Fashion Design
2 - You cannot focus on your qualifications that will make you an excellent candidate for FIT alone. You also need...
Undergraduatechloieroupe - Nov 9, 2023Holt - Nov 19, 2023
|The Benefits of curb as a Waste Diversion Program in the City of Peoria
2 - This reference should come later in the opinion paper. Possibly in the 2nd or 3rd paragraph. You have...
Research PapersRborquez6500 - Nov 9, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
|Definition paragraph . Define the word ' solidarity ' and give your own perspective
2 - I think you meant to refer to "community" as in the place where the solidarity is taking place?...
Writing FeedbackLOIDAT - Nov 9, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
|UBC Personal Profile - What is important to you? And why? "Photography"
3 - @Holt Hi, is there a way to private message you on here? Not here, but you may email: firstname.lastname@example.org...
Undergraduateyooogiis - Nov 6, 2023Mav47 - 15 hrs ago
|Motivation letter for International Master's program in Neuroscience (NeuroBIM)
3 - Thank you for your feedback, I will revise the essay accordingly, but about my scientific publication, since I will...
Lettersminhsym1341 - Nov 5, 2023minhsym1341 - Nov 9, 2023
|Happiness levels increased in developing nations compared to declining levels in developed one
2 - Your prompt restatement did not include the basis for the happiness of both sectors, which is economic growth (financual...
Writing Feedbackhuyenmy2612 - Nov 5, 2023Holt - Nov 21, 2023
|IELTS task 2 - the most important environmental problems
2 - Do not focus on a particular country or form of governance. This is a generalized discussion topic so...
Writing Feedbackjjwon - Nov 5, 2023Holt - Nov 21, 2023
|The chart below depicts the way families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018
2 - The report does not meet the minimum 150 word requirement. There will be a small percentage deducted from the...
Writing Feedbackadwdhkkn - Nov 5, 2023Holt - Nov 19, 2023
|IELTS Writing Task 1: bar chart about computer ownership
2 - The writer has a relaxed and comfortable writing style. Reading it made me feel as if you just took...
Writing Feedbacknghn_thyyannh - Nov 4, 2023Holt - Nov 19, 2023
|PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR BIOLOGICAL SCIENCE BACHELOR DEGREE
2 - Since this is a personal statement, you should make an effort to balance out the information you provide about...
Undergraduatealexdo - Nov 4, 2023Holt - Nov 5, 2023
|W Task 2: The necessity of schools in providing knowledge for students
2 - Your opinion is well presented but, lacking in more depth so as to increase your score. You need to...
Writing Feedbackhuonggiang206 - Nov 3, 2023Holt - Nov 5, 2023
|Cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourist
2 - The essay will get a failing task accuracy score in terms of paraphrasing considerations. That is because you decided...
Writing FeedbackMihnie21 - Nov 3, 2023Holt - Nov 5, 2023
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] - Music - opinion essay
2 - While you did write a very flowery restatement, it missed the mark for most counts in relation to the...
Writing Feedbackchau_pham - Nov 2, 2023Holt - Nov 5, 2023
|Talk about your career in future
3 - I think it would be better if you could elaborate what kind of aspects that you want to learn...
Undergraduatenganhoang - Nov 2, 2023kokor0 - Nov 18, 2023
|Music helps to create an environment without barrier for people to understand more about each other
3 - I notice the use of academic vocabulary in the first 3 paragraphs. However, improvements still need to be made...
Writing Feedbackhannie286 - Nov 2, 2023chau_pham - Nov 2, 2023
|Letter of Motivation for Admission to the BBA Program at KU Leuven
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 - topic about crime prediction
3 - thank you so much for checking my essay! i deeply appreciate your effort. I just want to clarify that...
Writing Feedbacknghn_thyyannh - Nov 1, 2023nghn_thyyannh - Nov 2, 2023
|[IELTS TASK 1 - MAP] - changes in Felix Stone
2 - For starters, you can lower your word count to better suit the 20 minute writing time frame. Learn to...
Writing Feedbackchau_pham - Nov 1, 2023Holt - Nov 1, 2023
|In many countries obesity and unhealthy eating habits are increasing. What are the reasons for this?
2 - Avoid such exaggerated references in the restatement. Remember that the original topic is based upon logic. Therefore, only...
Writing Feedbackquynhhoa123 - Oct 31, 2023Holt - Nov 1, 2023
|GKS Graduate Nursing Science Feb2024
Scholarshipm1lly3 - Oct 31, 2023m1lly3 - Nov 9, 2023
|Social Ethical Theories with an Emphasis on Deontology as a preferred solution
NEW - Help me compare and contrast deontology and utilitarianism theories. The aim will be to challenge the differences in...
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|This is the place where I want to be - Fashion Institute of Technology Admittance Essay
5 - Coming from an aspiring designer myself, I don't think you would enjoy attending FIT. You don't sound very passionate...
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