|Not one without water - Personal Statement for Commonwealth Shared Scholarship
2 - There should be an expanded discussion in relation to the second paragraph. Consider how you contributed to solving the...
Scholarshipchhena96 - Mar 28, 2021Holt - Mar 29, 2021
|Autobiography to apply scholarship study abroad
Scholarshiptuongvy1992003 - Mar 27, 2021tuongvy1992003 - Mar 28, 2021
|AAS Scholarship Master of Commerce; Data Analyst for business, Digital Transformation Specialization
5 - I would advise you to add at least one other university - which provides a similar programme - for...
Scholarshipalfazrinb - Mar 27, 2021Alif ID - 1 day ago
|NZ International businesses - Is this a well thought out Introduction and Thesis Statement
2 - You cannot jump from first to last without representing the discussion topics in between. You have the right idea,...
Writing Feedbackkartstar113 - Mar 27, 2021Holt - Mar 28, 2021
|Master in Local Government - How will the proposed course will contribute to your career?
3 - @Holt thankyou for your valuable comments. Murdoch University is also providing Master of Arts in Local Governance. I think...
Scholarshipassad12 - Mar 26, 2021assad12 - Mar 27, 2021
|Learning Korean - GKS - Statement of Purpose - Language Study Plan
2 - The language study plan is normally responded to within 1-2 paragraphs that immediately outline the pre-Korea and post-Korea language...
Graduateiyo - Mar 26, 2021Holt - Mar 27, 2021
|Self-employment became popular among the majority of people. Why is that?
Writing FeedbackMsC - Mar 25, 2021MsC - Mar 29, 2021
|Some are born with talents. Some are not. But an appropriate approach can help.
2 - You have an almost perfect presentation here. The only problem, is that you used your personal opinion as a...
Writing Feedbackhungprovip0089 - Mar 25, 2021Holt - Mar 26, 2021
|GKS-G Korean Scholarship | Personal Statement | M.S. Public Policy (Environment/Green Development)
3 - Thank you for your response. I've checked and do qualify under a new Korean Heritage category, provided neither...
Graduatescoriae - Mar 25, 2021scoriae - Mar 26, 2021
|GKS-G Global Korean Scolarship | Personal Statement | Ph.D. in Cybersecurity
3 - Thanks for your feedback. I rewrote the personal statement: Hello, my name is Oscar Llerena. I am the...
Graduateresearcher182 - Mar 25, 2021researcher182 - Mar 29, 2021
|Topic: Some people believe that children are required to obey the rules of their parents and teacher
2 - A prompt restatement is always helped by a clear opinion being presented at the end of the final thesis...
Writing Feedbackthanhvo - Mar 25, 2021Holt - Mar 26, 2021
|My Demon - The verdict of my diagnoses
NEW - THE VERDICT The pain in my shoulder had not changed by the time of my appointment with Dr. Reed....
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|Universities should focus on specialist subject - this is a much better choice. IELTS Writing task 2
5 - Hi @CBQ. I'd love to discuss the sentence "it leads to undergraduates' poor motivation..." I don't think the...
Writing FeedbackCBQ - Mar 24, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Apr 7, 2021
|What aspect of your leadership you consider to be effective, how you solve problems in organisation?
3 - @Holt Sorry I couldn't delete the previous thread. I have further refined that paragraph and hoping it answers...
Scholarshipenkay30 - Mar 24, 2021enkay30 - 21 hrs ago
|Why I decided to take up science? Bachelor of Engineering or Bachelor of Aviation
ScholarshipJesus1 - Mar 24, 2021jackkenshi - Mar 25, 2021
|Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*? AAS; Crawford School of Public Policy
4 - use the more specific reason for university choice rather than the reputation reason. what course you interested and why...
Scholarshipyanbro - Mar 24, 2021DA786 - Mar 29, 2021
|Motivation Statement for AAS - applying for a master degree in Public Health
8 - @albertedwn keep fighting! you will pass the scholarship at the right time. so, actually what I mean is...
Scholarshipalbertedwn - Mar 24, 2021MsC - Mar 30, 2021
|Personal Statement for M.Eng. Mechanical Engineering at University of Alberta
2 - The ideal SOP presentation has a maximum word count of 750 words. I find this essay to be extremely...
GraduateDioBrando69 - Mar 23, 2021Holt - Mar 24, 2021
|Future people will not buy printed newspaper or books, they will read everything they want online
3 - Hi, I think you could diversify your presentation by using synonyms for 'printed newspaper" instead of the word itself....
Writing FeedbackHodiep - Mar 23, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Mar 26, 2021
|In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family
2 - There is an unnecessary discussion point in your restatement. The part about the main reasons why people would spare...
Writing FeedbackTri An - Mar 23, 2021Holt - Mar 24, 2021
|Telecommunications and Network re: Review my anwers to AA question
NEW - Why do you choose the course and Institution? AA scholarship question? Refer to my feedback below and review and...
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|Personal Essay: History - a concept, theory, or topic you have explored.
2 - You told the reviewer what topic is of interest to you. It was explained quite well. The reason you...
Writing FeedbackPocket Friend - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 23, 2021
|SHOW HOW THE WORLD HAS CHANGED SINCE THE INVENTION OF THE MOBILE PHONE
2 - If I am right and the original prompt of this essay was based on how people's interaction has changed...
Writing FeedbackNguyenMy19055 - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 23, 2021
|Study plan for Canada Study Permit. Canada - people from around the globe are welcomed there
Letterssintiash59 - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 23, 2021
|The line chart below shows the percentage of Internet users in 3 countries from 1999 to 2009
2 - - What kind of graph? Be specific. The reader cannot see the image. Show your familiarity with the...
Writing Feedbackngockhanh1811 - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 22, 2021
|Immigrants in America. Questbridge Long Essay
NEW - Original prompt: We are interested in learning more about you and the context in which you have grown up,...
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|New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers
3 - Thanks for your feedback. 1. I totally agree with exceeded word limit comment. I will work on limiting it...
Writing Feedbackdipsy07 - Mar 22, 2021dipsy07 - Mar 24, 2021
|First time I wrote an essay - Questbridge: An experience that caused you to change your perspective
2 - It is not a "poor me" essay. Rather, it is a self-analysis that shows the reviewer how far you...
UndergraduatePocket Friend - Mar 21, 2021Holt - Mar 22, 2021
|SOP for Masters of Information System Security
Graduatemesbah90 - Mar 21, 2021mesbah90 - 17 hrs ago
|Writing task 1 - the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 to 2006
2 - You still have room to make the report more informative. You have only written 169 words. The target word...
Writing Feedbackvanhoa - Mar 21, 2021Holt - Mar 22, 2021