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|Causes and measures to overcome overweight.
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|Prompt: Research a person to find information about his/her life and achievements.
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|The neighborhood I grew up in (grateful for the great influences and for my parents for being there)
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|Unprivileged background. USEFP Global UGRAD - my personal statement
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|The advertisers use advanced techniques to show their products better and more attractive. TOEFL
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|Some countries have a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of elderlies
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|IELTS GT Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
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|Why do we need music? And what about 'traditional' tracks? Aren't they obsolete today?
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|IELTS - The digital and traditional newspapers
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|What invention in the last 30 years has made the most difference in the lives of people?
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|Care taking of kids when parents are away
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|Essay about the charts' summarization - money for children's sports in Britain
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|IELTS - Artists have more attention than scientists
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|IELTS - useful or harmful chemicals in our food
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|Many employers are now offering their employees the option to work from home.
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|Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs: Applicable in to education at all levels
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|IELTS; The media should reduce bad news that they write or say
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|The youngster population surpass the number of older people in some countries
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|Some people become famous at young age. Is it good thing or bad thing?
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|Several advantages of playing sport games
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|Some parent allow their children to get busy with paid work
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|MOTIVATION LETTER FOR PG COURSE IN GERMANY (Photovoltaics Engineering) at Köthen Anhalt University
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|(CBEST)- A sharp increases in the minimum wage or no
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|Many people prefer to use public transportation while others choose personal cars
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|In order to improve a country's education system.... criticize teachers?
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|Participating in voluntary work in which youngsters provide support for others
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|The question about publication of crucial scientific information - Ielts writing task 2 cambrige 12
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|Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes
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