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|IELTS Writing Task 2 (First time attempting)
2 - The prompt restatement+opinion is totally incorrect. You failed to restate both public opinions in individual sentences, then offer your...
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|MSc Data Science - Personal Statement
2 - The entire middle part of the first paragraph needs to be removed. Compress the first and second paragraph for...
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|LoM - Argument of an engineering student applying for masters in global development policy - EMJMD
2 - Sadly, you have not developed a compelling argument because your presentation takes on a personal statement direction rather than...
GraduateSSS2022 - 19 hrs agoHolt - 3 hrs ago
|Sharing my passion for food with others. UBC personal profile "What is important to you?"
2 - Theh keyword here is "What is", singular. Your response is reflective of "What are", plural. You can't divide the...
Undergraduatedavinnuhh - 23 hrs agoHolt - 22 hrs ago
|IELTS TASK 2: Open plan office no walls, no barriers. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
2 - You cannot use a rhetorical question to represent the restatement of the original prompt. Use a direct statement...
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|'The acquisition of knowledge is a never-ending process' - Motivation letter for Neurasmus
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|Writing IELTS Task 2: The importance of History vs Science and Technology in school
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|[NEED REVIEW] "I find Data Science fascinating" - Statement of Purpose for Master of Data Science
2 - What a lovely personal statement. Too bad it failed to contain any actual reference to the purpose for your...
GraduateKavan14 - 1 day agoHolt - 1 day ago
|Enhancing my skills - What is important to me - UBC application
2 - I understand that you are motivated by success because you stated that directly. The problem, is that you are...
Undergraduatetoastedbread7533 - 1 day agoHolt - 1 day ago
|Writing task 1 about the percentage of people's coffee & tea drinking habits in 5 Australian cities
2 - The column chart. Help the reader get an idea as to how the measurements are presented in the...
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|Why are you applying to UW Madison and why are you interested in studying the major?
3 - THANK YOU FOR THE FEEDBACK! I'VE DELETED THE SECTIONS YOU MENTIONED AND ADDED MORE THAT'S RELATED TO THE...
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|From my point of view, i firmly believe that the merits of Internet far outweight its drawbacks
2 - Okay, you have presented the discussion based on general observations of the given topic. Acceptable, but could have been...
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|AUSTRALIA - DESTINATION FOR THE JOBSEEKERS
2 - While this reference does indicate the number of years covered by the measurement, it does not accurately portray...
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|TASK 2: More and more students choose to study abroad to have a better education and environment
2 - When I give a student advice in an essay to help improve his writing abilities and scoring potential in...
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|Task 2: The idea of whether or not to accept the social convention of a host country
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|[Need Review] Statement of Purpose - MS in Artificial Intelligence and Data Science (Summer 2022)
2 - Your statement of purpose feels over extended and needs to be whittled down to only 750-1000 words. It tends...
GraduateVJain - Dec 2, 2021Holt - Dec 2, 2021
|Ielts writing: Why is global warming a problem? How can reduce the dangers of global warming?
2 - You understood the question, but cast too wide a net in terms of discussion topics. In fact, the discussion...
Writing FeedbackMeilsn8804 - Dec 1, 2021Holt - Dec 2, 2021
|Task 1: The maps elaborate on the layout moderations of an art gallery's ground floor
2 - A user cannot dictate specific review requirements unless the user requests for private paid review services. Only general review...
Writing Feedbacknhidinh1231 - Dec 1, 2021Holt - Dec 1, 2021
|CSC Development impact statement, How your proposed study relates to development issues
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|It's precisely what I was looking for; europubhealth+ scholarship motivation letter
3 - As ellaborate as it seems, I think you fail to mention most of those thing that have motivated you...
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|UBC - what my family, friends, and community think of me? A person who they know they can count on.
2 - You are right about the story removing the focus of your statement from the prompt requirements. Actually, the reviewer...
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|UGRAD to enrich my skills in communicating, leading people, motivating, and building relationships
2 - This is a good and simple personal statement, but it is not one that follows the Global UGrad guidelines....
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|Essay about the argument of TV purpose, for entertaining or education and information
Writing FeedbackKhoahoctunhien - Nov 30, 2021nhidinh1231 - 2 days ago
|Life in high-rise apartments provides a much better sense of community than life in houses
2 - Hi, as a general format essay based on a solid personal point of view of both statements, the essay...
Writing Feedbackcattho2001 - Nov 30, 2021Holt - Dec 1, 2021
|UIC application personal essay -"Meaning of My Life"
2 - Here is the thing, reviewers find it hard to believe any truthful interest in a specific form of...
Undergraduatedavid18 - Nov 30, 2021Holt - Nov 30, 2021
|Common App Essay - "Love Yourself"
2 - I do not personally believe that this is the correct prompt for this essay. Your discussion is more of...
Undergraduatehannah18 - Nov 30, 2021Holt - Nov 30, 2021
|More people become well-known for their scandals and wealth, instead of their exceptional talent
2 - You are over discussing this essay to the point where you will not be able to complete all the...
Writing Feedbacknhidinh1231 - Nov 30, 2021Holt - Nov 30, 2021
|Topic: "If you were the mayor of your town or village, what would you do to improve the quality "
3 - Secondly, there are ... You did not mention the first your logical cause, but went straight to "Secondly". ...
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|I am an introvert. My strengths are the ability to work independently and creatively, I can complete
3 - Just as you acknowledge that your strength are the ability to work independently and creatively. That is what your...
Grammar, Usagesinhdang - Nov 30, 2021Famous125 - Dec 1, 2021
|Some people have chosen to take a holiday trip away from home to other provinces
2 - What is the cultural relevance of Tet beyond marking a season? This reference has to be further explained...
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