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|Viewpoints on advertising
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|The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy.
2 - The writer will do good to remember that there is a 40 minute time limit on the writing, editing,...
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|Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world
2 - This is a well written personal statement that can be used for other scholarship applications. It is not a...
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|About the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas
2 - An error was made in image representation that will affect the restatement of the image content. There are 6...
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|Writing IELTS Task 2: Some people believe that robots will play an important role in...
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|IELTS 2 Agree/Disagree: Festival
2 - The strength and strong scoring potential of this essay is in its ability to deliver the discussion as required....
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|IELTS 2: family, children
2 - When an exam taker writes as incoherently as this person, he can only expect one result from the test....
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - As a learning tool for young people, the media is better than experiences.
2 - Since the response for this essay is to be based on a measured response, the opening sentence cannot begin...
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|@IELTS Task-2 Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Other
2 - The first sentence in this presentation is referred to as a throw away. That means the writer is using...
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|Ielts writing task 1: student accommodation
3 - you are writing coherently enough, but your sentences should be linked more together as too many simple ones can...
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|Despite the availability of many translation softwares, it is still beneficial to learn a language.
2 - The writer has created an orginal prompt statement rather than simply restating the original prompt. As such, the task...
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|The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population
3 - You probably have not included the prompt, so your task response will be hard to evaluate this essay. Assume...
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|Environmental Problem Essay (Task 2)
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|Will taking risks brings us more advantages than disadvantage (Task 2)
3 - Basically, you are anwering with an off-topic essay. The prompt asked you to express your opinion evaluating whether there...
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|Homelessness IELTS part 2
2 - The reason that there was an over writing time is because the writer was focused on writing reasons rather...
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|A writing about education. Tuition fees for studies
2 - Do not refer to something as a public opinion, when it is not indicated as such in the original...
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|IELTS@In many countries, people spend more and more time away from their families. What causes this
3 - Please note that the word count on your essay isn't met the IELTS requirements for task two. You can...
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|Learning local history more crucial for pupils than gaining knowledge about the world's past events
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|How to write an essay when switching majors from under graduation (Electronics) to Masters (CS)
2 - If the writer never performed any jobs outside of the computer software or computer science field, then he is...
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|IELTS Task 1 - write a letter to report customer's complaints
3 - The writer has made some basic grammatical mistakes in this letter, such as "become perfect" instead of "become perfectly"...
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|Research Essay (Biometric Security issues and lack of government oversight)
2 - This is a research paper that is to be framed within a general reference point of view. The use...
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|Nothing can be done to prevent crime. To which extent do you agree or not?
2 - Do not immediately discuss the essay topic in the first paragraph. That is an automatic failing score since the...
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|UBC - Explain how you responded to a problem and/or an unfamiliar situation. What did I do?
2 - Why is a large part of this essay written with the first word capitalized? Does the applicant not know...
UndergraduateArshit0303 - Aug 13, 2022Holt - Aug 14, 2022
|Statement of Purpose for a Software Engineering Graduate Program.
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (NATURAL PROCESS): The diagram shows the life of a honey bee.
6 - There is a detail that the bee gets the pattern after the second moulting, which should be added. ...
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|The youth pay more attention to entertainment celebrities than the historic figures of their nations
2 - The prompt restatement is well developed. However, the establishing discussion topics are missing from the opinion statement, thus leaving...
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|Is writing and publishing books only for writers?
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|ESSAYS ABOUT PUBLIC MUSEUMS AND ART GALLERIES (are they still needed?)
3 - Hi, In your first reasoning paragraph, your topic sentence mentions that:"... public museums and art galleries had better be...
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|If a product is good enough or it meets people's needs, advertising is unnecessary. Opinion essay
4 - Yes, I also think you made a mistake about "fish source" instead of "fish sauce", which then causes the...
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|Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones (school day). Both views
3 - I think you should divide the second paragraph into 2 parts so as to make it easier to follow....
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