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2 - Quan, in order to bring more clarity to your presentation, you need to kick off the essay with an...
Scholarshipquantran_hust - 23 hours agoHolt - 7 hours ago
|Motivation Letter - I am willing to apply to Erasmus Mundus Joint Masters Degree Program
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|The extinction of animal species. What causes this? How to protect our fauna?
2 - Nella, please use a timer the next time you write a Task 2 practice essay. You will find that...
Writing Feedbacknellawatyahmad26 - 1 day agoHolt - 7 hours ago
|I trust the future potential of Data Science, and I trust my own ability to excel at it. SOP
GraduateZhichen - 1 day agoZhichen - 2 hours ago
|LOI for MA in Economics and Finance - about myself, my goal, why master's program, etc.
2 - James, there is a lack of advanced planning in your letter of motivation. While I understand the background story...
Graduatetjhornet - 1 day agoHolt - 9 hours ago
|My love for chemistry and personal investment in biology and medicine, Ph.D. in pharmacology
2 - Hi Kylie, I really believe that the last 2 paragraphs of your essay more than accurately responds to the...
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|JHU Supplemental Essay - an impact by collaboration with others
2 - Hi Leyla. I have to say, this essay really hit the mark when considering the prompt requirements. It is...
Undergraduateleylamagsud - 1 day agoHolt - 1 day ago
|To be a part of the introduction of sustainable and affordable biotechnology, the International Plan
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Undergraduateibk101 - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|Identify one piece in your portfolio that you are most passionate about, tell us the story behind it
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Undergraduatech15hann - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|Common wealth development impact essay
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Scholarshipmbaruck - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|Should authorities spend money on transportation infrastructure investments or not?
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Writing Feedbackminh2001 - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|A time, in or outside the classroom, when you worked with others and what you learned from this
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Undergraduatemominanaveed - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|SOP for admission in a course of statistics & machine learning
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Graduatejrakhshanda - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|Use of first person in essay regarding humans
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Grammar, Usagema123 - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|Tourism- the key to cultural coherence; being a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program
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ScholarshipInoyatillo - Dec 10, 2018Holt - 2 days ago
|Personal Statement for Undergraduate Program in Computer Science
2 - Mohammed, the essay works but could be improved. The last part about the choice of university, makes this decision...
Undergraduateanon123 - Dec 10, 2018Holt - 2 days ago
|Writing a motivational letter to Tribos- ERASMUS programme in Tribology of Surfaces.
6 - @Holt Can you please go through it once again. Working in CBCMT lab with dedicated researchers who were...
Graduateshubhangsharma - Dec 10, 2018shubhangsharma - 2 hours ago
|What are your artistic interests/goals? Advice on CalArts artist statements.
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Undergraduatech15hann - Dec 10, 2018ch15hann - Dec 10, 2018
|Sharing the world - application essay. (to Duke Kunshan University)
Undergraduatekaia0911 - Dec 9, 2018kaia0911 - 3 hours ago
|Personal statement for pursuing a joint masters in Tourism Development and Culture in UK
3 - Thank you very much. Taking your comments into consideration, I made a second draft bellow. I hope its improved....
ScholarshipPat94 - Dec 9, 2018Pat94 - Dec 10, 2018
|Many students have to study subjects which they do not like.
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|How has globalisation had an impact on transportation in your country? (changes and causes)
3 - Hi. It is good when you cite out the timing milestones in the first paragraph, from bicycles, motorbikes and...
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|Should lower secondary school students play video games?
Undergraduatetrantuandiem - Dec 8, 2018lhnbich - Dec 8, 2018
|What is important to me? PROTECTING OUR NATURE AND ENSURING ANIMAL WELFARE
3 - I would not want to confuse the reviewer by using dividers to create choices in the presentation. You are...
UndergraduateSupantha - Dec 8, 2018Holt - Dec 9, 2018
|People cannot eliminate the habit of smoking
5 - A "cancer stick" is a slang English term. That is not acceptable in formal English which is a requirement...
Writing Feedbacksillyman2000 - Dec 8, 2018Holt - Dec 9, 2018
|They say that I'm the one who does crazy stuff with Electricity; Tell us about who you are essay
3 - Thanks a lot...
UndergraduateNishantfizz - Dec 8, 2018Nishantfizz - 4 hours ago
|Write about a journey where you got lost to send to the magazine.
3 - Hi Nicole, it appears that you have confused some of the commonly used English words in your essay. "turn...
Writing FeedbackNicole Nguyen - Dec 8, 2018Holt - Dec 9, 2018
|Common application essay - When that Eisenbahn hit me
UndergraduateCabradasbrisa - Dec 8, 2018Cabradasbrisa - Dec 8, 2018
|Bakery and recipes - WASHU SUPPLEMENTAL ESSAY
5 - @Holt Hello, thank you for the honest review. I really someone to tell me this wasn't the right prompt...
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