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|The Statement of Purpose as it relates to the MS in Data Science program, and your career goals
NEW - I would like to hear your valuable comments on my statement. This letter is close to being its final...
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|GKS SCHOLARSHIP / PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR INTERNATIONAL STUDIES - EMBASSY TRACK, COLOMBIA
NEW - Hello everyone I am going to apply to the GKS scholarship on this february. I am a little bit...
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|IELTS Writing task 2 - Curfew effects on teens
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|IELTS Writing Task I: UK Cinema Attendance of different age citizens, from 1990 to 2010
2 - The summary overview is incomplete. It does not include the age group representation which is necessary to complete the...
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|IELTS WT2: Studying other country's cultures
2 - Where is your response to the prompt requirement? I do not see it in the final sentence of your...
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|IELTS 2. Children should always follow parents advice till they become more independent and mature
2 - One of the first things that the examiner will check for with your essay is the word count. You...
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|Personal Statement for Master Degree - University Track
2 - The portion about your parents influence on you should be totally removed. That used to be a requirement under...
Graduatejos3ph - 18 hrs agoHolt - 12 hrs ago
|Why I'm not motivated in highschool
2 - The first 4 sentences sound more like you wallowing in self-pity instead of you justifying your low grades and...
Undergraduatehowardturtle - 22 hrs agoHolt - 18 hrs ago
|One employment opportunity - it's impact and the greatest learning outcome for me
2 - As of the moment, what I think is implied in the essay is that you are a self-centered person...
UndergraduateSakyo107 - 23 hrs agoHolt - 18 hrs ago
|UW AIF Part B: Question 4. Data Science / Machine Learning
2 - This statement is meant to get to know you beyond your interest in Data Science and Machine Learning. I...
Undergraduatejust_a_gene - 1 day agoHolt - 19 hrs ago
|Governments should not have to provide care or financial support for elderly people because ...
3 - @Holt Thank you for your comments. I was aiming for a "balanced" view response not "strong " or "partially...
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|Motivation Letter for a Machine Learning Master at a Swedish University
2 - The motivation letter did not come full circle. An effective motivation letter would have presented the motivation at the...
Letterschewedmentos - 1 day agoHolt - 19 hrs ago
|Uw AIF for computer science coop. Part A Question 1
3 - As Holt mentioned, try to be more specific in your goals and what led you to them. For example,...
UndergraduateIR_567 - 1 day agojust_a_gene - 1 day ago
|Writing my personal statement on moving states and finding myself
2 - Try to make this essay stronger by explaining what research path you wish to take. If it is laboratory...
Undergraduatenormsauce - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|Opinion Essay. City or country?
2 - This essay is riddled with grammatical errors. The sentences do not make any sense in most instances due to...
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|Ielts 1 - The proportion of household expenditures between Japan and Malaysia in the same year 2010
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|'to make a difference in Prague' - ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP: TOURISM DEVELOPMENT AND CULTURE (MSC)
2 - The last paragraph should be the opening paragraph of this essay. It carries your actual motivation for your desire...
UndergraduateVitova6 - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - UK telephone calls, by category, 1995-2002 - local, international, mobiles
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|Task 1: the percentage of water for different purpose - industry, agriculture and domestic
2 - I cannot accurately review your work without the chart / image provided for this task. Please remember to include...
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|IELTS task2: man-made activities are making global temperatures higher
3 - Thank you! That is really helpful. I will practice how to paraphrase according to you suggestion!...
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|"adaptable" - UBC application essay----tell us about yourself
2 - You only responded to the last part of the essay regarding what you are proud of. You failed to...
Undergraduatekarmalea - 2 days agoHolt - 2 days ago
|IELTS line graph - task 1 - thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.
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|IVEY AEO ESSAY (Character in Leadership)
2 - The opening paragraph doesn't hold the interest of the reader. Open immediately with the relevant discussion instead. In this...
Undergraduateyellowjello123 - Jan 14, 2020Holt - 2 days ago
|TOEFL ESSAY - About restriction for marketing strategies directed at kids (eg. TV's advertising)
2 - It is not a question of whether more regulation is required when it comes to advertising to children, it...
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|The statistics of afforestation on all continents over the world
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|I am putting forward my candidacy for enrollment in electrical engineering of an University
2 - Don't just rely on Elon Musk and his accomplishments in the field of neural science to prove your motivation...
Undergraduatemoog2001 - Jan 14, 2020Holt - 2 days ago
|The internet provide us with easy connection to other people, however it also isolates us
2 - The complete prompt for this essay indicates that requires a clear degree of dis/agreement with the given topic. As...
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|ielts task 2; Millions of people doing unhealthy activities which are harmful
3 - The introduction must accurately summarize the content of the prompt in order for it to gain a proper TA...
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|The band that I organized by myself. Activities that are most important to you
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|Waterloo Engineering and AFM AIF - Accounting and Financial Management
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