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|Path to Studying Business in Korea - Personal statement GKS
2 - I cannot help you with a proper review of your personal statement. The first of which is that you...
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|Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
2 - Your response seems to be correct upon first reading. However, reading the writing instructions will show that your...
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|"The Biscuit Heist" - Common Application Personal Statement
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|TU Graz MsC of Computer Science motivation Letter
2 - The letter is good. The theoretical motivation is there. It is clear. Where you want to apply it and...
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|WRITING TASK 1 (IELTS):Number of Vehicles Bought in Kiwi City
2 - The summary overview was almost complete. You just forgot to reference that the vehicle sales were measured in the...
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|Motivation letter to study masters in material science word limit is 2500 characters.
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|writing task 1-line graph : The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies
2 - Be careful with your singular v. plural word usage. 5 is more than 1 and therefore, should be...
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|ielt p2: causes why people like online meeting than meeting directly and solution for it
2 - In the later part of the first paragraph, you should be separating your suggestions for solutions to the situation...
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|Advice for a statement of purpose for a master in robotics at EPFL
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|UCLA Theater, Film and Television Supplemental Essays - Life Challenge Essay
2 - Your essay is right on the mark as far as I am concerned. You have depicted a lifelong struggle...
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|Balancing my life priorities - UBC Application: Tell us about who you are.
NEW - Please comment on my application essay for UBC Engineering, the question is "TELL US ABOUT WHO YOU ARE. HOW...
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|Statement of purpose for MSC mechatronics at ETH review; the sop has word limit of 1000 words.
NEW - Seeing my old grandparents struggle with daily chores like cleaning, cooking or even getting items lower to the ground...
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|IELTS WRITRING TASK 1: The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European
2 - The summary overview requires you to give a short listing of the information provided, which will be discussed...
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|writing task 1: The chart shows the information about salt intake in the US in 2000.
2 - I would like to call your attention to this presentation. It is confusing. You are focusing the reader's...
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|WRITING TASK 2: IN MANY COUNTRIES AROUND THE WORLD, LIFE EXPECTANCY IS INCREASING
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|Looking for critiques on USC Cinematic Arts (Animation) Personal Statement!
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|Writing task 1 - The percentage of households with cars
2 - The first sentence of your summary overview is not really going to be considered an original statement. It still...
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|The line chart illustrate fish and meat consumption (grams) in HCM city from 1979 to 2004-WRITING 1
2 - There are different meat descriptions available in the chart. You should not be identifying the meats in a...
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|SECCLO programme, career aspirations, relevant experience and achievements
2 - The program is asking you to describe your professional experience in relation to the program requirements. I do not...
Undergraduatechol - Nov 30, 2023Holt - 21 hrs ago
|Document about your academic and research background, career goals, academic interest and program
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|Traveling to work - writing task 1: Pie chart
2 - The summary overview is missing from the actual discussion. That is the first paragraph that kicks off all task...
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|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] The effect of professional sports on children
2 - You should not have began to present your personal opinions about the discussion in the first paragraph. That would...
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|Ielts: is using technology a bad trend ?
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|HEALTH DISPARITIES AND EQUITY - NEED
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|UBC SAUDER PERSONAL PROFILE QUESTION
2 - This sounds like a very concise presentation of the problem that you faced as a co-CEO of the school...
Undergraduateseniorstudent - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
|The graph about the percentage of tourits visiting different countries in 2010
2 - Try to clarify the type of graph next time. There are several graphs used in the task 1 essay...
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|Causes, effects and solutions in waste and rubbish pollution
4 - Apart from that, I can see that you used advanced vocabulary and the structure is good but as mentioned...
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|Writing task 1 - Process of growwing and making products from pineapples
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|Common App-The contagious influence of smiles
2 - You have too many references for the Smile reference. Bring it down to 2 examples. Keep the perspective of...
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|Quitting Basketball - Common App Essay
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