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PERSONAL STATEMENT KGSP/GKS-G MBA

NEW - I was born and raised in a city named --- in ---. I'm the first child with 3 siblings....

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It is argued that schooling from early age would be ideal for the children' development

2 - While the prompt restatement and opinion is not grammatically accurate, it is still understandable enough for an ENL. Your...

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Motivation Statement for MS Game and Media Technology in Utrecht University

2 - Like is not enough of a reason to want to study this MS course. Unless you can create...

Graduateboringjill - 17 hrs agoHolt - 6 hrs ago

SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION FOR ERASMUS MUNDUS FOR MASTERS IN MANAGEMENT AND ENG OF ENERGY & ENVIRONMENT

2 - You can strike this totally from the presentation because it does not offer any insight into your motivation....

Scholarshipnere - 21 hrs agoHolt - 6 hrs ago

Research paper on why serial killers choose to commit multiple murders

NEW - Killer Instincts: How Serial Killers are Molded into the Monsters That They Are For years serial killers have...

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"A suitable candidate" - Could you help me out with the Stipendium Hungaricum (Scholarship) essay?

2 - Wanting to study for free in a foreign land is not an acceptable reason to apply for the...

Scholarshipkartoshatatosha - 23 hrs agoHolt - 6 hrs ago

WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU? WHY? Knowing my limits

NEW - Of the many things important to me, knowing my limits is the highest. In my earlier years of high...

Undergraduatemo6562 - 6 hrs ago -

These days people in some countries are living in a "throwaway" society which means people use thing

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The consumption of sugar based drinks is on the rise. How to tackle this problem?

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" It is beneficial for teenagers to receive pocket money from their parents". Do you agree?

2 - There are several problems with your opening statement. The first, is that you used a direct cut and paste...

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IELTS writing task 2. Should students pay for their colleges' tuition fee, or government?

2 - This is highly non-academic in reference. Avoid using too much everyday English words that are informal in presentation....

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IELTS Task 1: The price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne

2 - Two things are missing from your summary overview. The first is the number of charts. The second, is the...

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IELTS Writing task 2: Children with mobile phone discussion

2 - As a basic rule, you must not begin the discussion of your opinion in the prompt restatement + opinion...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - ESSAY ABOUT ECONOMICS

2 - Your summary is well developed. It properly enumerates the markets involved and the trends that the collective comparison...

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The tables give information about the temperatures and daylight hours in 4 cities during same week

2 - Make it clear that the measurement was done during the same year for the same last 3 days...

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Taking Initiative - UBC Personal Profile Admissions - What is important to you and why?

2 - There is a problem with your claim. While you did take the initiative to make your voice heard and...

Undergraduatekarenxmx - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago

Academic (LOR) Letter of recommendation for MS in Energy Systems Engineering

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Personal Statement for MSc Finance & Accounting in Westminster

2 - I apologize for having to say this but, this is a very weak, non qualifying personal statement. It lacks...

Graduateleesol - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago

Large public places and parks are significant for cities' residents

2 - Do not begin the discussion of your opinion in relation to the topic in the prompt restatement + opinion...

Writing FeedbackHarry Yang - Nov 24, 2021Holt - 1 day ago

Tell us about your expectations for the SECCLO programme, career aspirations, relevant experience

3 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback...

Scholarshipiska - Nov 24, 2021iska - 1 day ago

UBC application essay question - "tell us about who you are", confident, curious, goal-driven

2 - you only read the first sentence of the full prompt. The full prompt asks you to "Tell us about...

Undergraduatedogepowers - Nov 24, 2021Holt - 2 days ago

GENERATION GAP IN LIFESTYLES, VIEWPOINTS AND BEHAVIOURS

2 - The question was , "To what extent?" The extent is missing in this response. You should have stated...

Writing Feedbackkirarara - Nov 23, 2021Holt - Nov 24, 2021

IELTS Writing Task 2 - Adults and students are working and studying from home

2 - Wrong reasoning. This question tests your knowledge of current events. How you relate the pandemic, Covid - 19,...

Writing Feedbackdanh55162 - Nov 23, 2021Holt - Nov 24, 2021

Should we encourage the youth to engage in unpaid community work?

2 - There is a difference between ordinary community work and free community service. The difference is basesd on remuneration....

Writing Feedbacktenhquameo - Nov 23, 2021Holt - Nov 24, 2021

(IELTS WRITING 1) PIE CHART The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your review, I will correct these mistakes....

Writing Feedbacksherry2345 - Nov 11, 2021sherry2345 - Nov 24, 2021

Write a letter of complaint to a store where you purchased a faulty new phone

3 - Hi poster, The letter lacks the vital information that will improve your score. You didn't give enough detail...

LettersFreya01 - Nov 21, 2021ToluTemi - Nov 23, 2021

MOTIVATION LETTER (LOM) - REVIEW - M. Engg. in TECHNOLOGY & INNOVATION MANAGEMENT

3 - The opening statement is great. You showed the problem you are trying to solve with the masters degree. However,...

Lettersssaolniall - Nov 20, 2021ToluTemi - Nov 23, 2021

Should the government put a tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to eat more healthily?

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GENDER - Writing Task 2 - Several renowned organizations are headed by men

3 - @Holt @Hana146 Thanks for your feedback! This is my first essay IELTS Writing Task 2 and I made a...

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Essay about should the goverment funding for school fees

2 - This is a very elementary form of word usage and referencing. This is not the way a college...

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