My academic and practical experiences have crystallized my career objectives into a clear path. In the short term, I aim to work in research and development within the aerospace industry, focusing on the integration of advanced aerodynamics and systems design to create high-performance air vehicles. My long-term vision is to become an aerospace engineer where I can mentor the next generation of aviation technologies
The aerospace industry - My career goals in my motivation letter
I am unable to offer a clearer review of your career goals with regards to its relationship to your history in the motivation letter. Without knowing the full content of the motivation letter, it is impossible to tell you if this paragraph works, doesn't work, or should be improved at certain points. All I can see, based on your two submissions, is that there is a clear disconnection between your history, experiences, and your career goals. I do not see how these relate to the use of drones in agriculture. The development is missing. Then again, I am basing these on piecemill content from your essay. If you want an accurate review, I need to read the full, connected paragraphs response that you developed for the motivation letter.
