" You are an angle" ; Letter to a person who helped me

Dear my brother
I am the real son of that old man who you helped when he was dying. I am really thankful of you and you're angle of my life. I can't express my feeling I am so emotional right now my father was dying, and I can't hold his hand and stand front of him. You don't know what you have done for me the nurse told me how you were holding my father hand and you were with him for whole night. I feel bad why I can't reach there on time I can't forgive myself. But I am happy my father think I was there and he was not alone there is someone his own blood. You are perfect example of love and good human begin with beautiful heart.

Your sincerely

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I am the real son of THE old man TO WHOM you helped when he was dying. I really thank you and you're THE angle of my life. I am so emotional THAT I can't express my feelingS right now . I WAS SO UNFORTUNATE THAT I COULD NOT hold his hand IN HIS LAST MOMENT. You have done me A LOT BY BEING WITH MY FATHER holding HIS hand for THE whole night. I can't forgive myself FOR NOT REACHING AT THE time. But I am happy FOR BEING THE SON OF my father AND FOR THE FACT THAT HE WAS NOT ALONE IN THE LAST MOMENT . You are A perfect example of A PERSON with A beautiful heart.

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I am really grateful to you and you are such an angle.


I cannot express how I feel about it; I was so unfortunate that I wasn't with him in his last moments.


.... .I cannot help blaming myself for not reaching there on time.


However, I am so glad that my father felt that I was there and he wasn't alone because he thought you were me.

Sehr Inam
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Kathleen Briggs
Tuesday, April 09, 2013
Important Person In My Life
An authoritative figure is a person with real power, and he has the power to change things. Who is an authoritative figure in my life? It is my older brother, Ali because he is the one who controls the matters of our home and makes the decisions. He has all the good qualities of a good authoritative person as he is responsible, he knows more about the worldly matters and he is a good person to look up to if one needs support in the family.

Firstly reason why my older brother Ali is main authoritative figure in my life because he is responsible. Ali knows the importance of time that's why he always tries to do his task on time. For example, he always wakes up early in the morning and does his everyday tasks on a fixed time schedule. He pays all of the utilities bills, home mortgage and car payment on time. He takes the responsibility of handling the finances of our household. Because of him my parents do not have to worry about any of major responsibilities of our house.

The second reason why my older brother is an authority figure in my life because he has higher education. Ali has a degree in Bachelor of Computer Science and he is still studying further to complete his masters. With all these studied he has also leant about the basic necessities needed to run a house hold and take care of his family Being an educated person Ali inspires me a lot, he is a role model to me and I want to be a well educated person like him. Ali always helps me with studies whenever I need help in college work.

The third reason why my older brother is an authoritative figure because he is a good supporter. Ali is a full time student and he also has a full time job because he helps my parents take care of everyday house expenses. He usually support me paying my college fees and my books as I do not make as much money as he does and need a little more financial support. My older brother play a big role in my life just like a father he is really good supporter for everyone in my house.

In final consideration these are the reasons that my brother he is authoritative figure in my life. He is responsible, educated and a good supporter. I consider my brother hero of my life as he is always there for me no matter what. Someday I wish I can be a good role model and an authoritative person in life just like my brother, Ali.

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