"Breaking The Limit 2016" competition - cover letter about audit internship recuiterment

Nguyen Thi Ngoc Ha
156/6 Cong Hoa Street, Tan Binh District, HCMC
Phone: - Email: nguyenthingocha1209

Mr. Tuan Anh/ Mrs. Lien Huong,

Audit Recruitment / Tax and Advisory Recruitment

Deloitte Vietnam

I learned that the competition "Breaking The Limit 2016" replaced the Deloitte Intership Program when I participated in the ACCA career fair workshop. I was impressed by the cultural and environmental in Deloitte and I want to start my career path in here. For reasons, I am writing to express my concern to the competition in this year as a nominee to compete this position.

I am currently a senior student at the University of Economics Ho Chi Minh City, where my major is accounting. During the time at university, I have exceptional conditions to assess the board of knowledge about auditing, accounting, tax, finance. Besides, I am on progress to self- study in F2, F3, IAS and other concerning subjects. So, I confident that I am a potential candidate for this competition if I have a chance.

I have a strength to working a team either a leader or a member. You will find me to be a responsible, motivated and hard-working person who is keen to learn and contribute Beside, I have a good command of English and ready to learn the new things.

Attached with this cover letter is my resume which would detail you regarding my abilities and qualification.
Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,
Ngọc Hŕ

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Hi ngocha,

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- ... I have an exceptional conditions to assess ...
- So, I confident that I am a potential candidate ...
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Hopefully it helps.