Dear Grad School Admission; LETTER TO GRAD SCHOOL

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Mar 15, 2014 #1

Hi all, could you please help me correct my grammar and mistakes on this email. I would like to have it polite as much as possible, but my intention may be fail without the help from you guys. By the way, I appreciate all suggestions or comment

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Dear Grad School Admission

I am a master degree applicant in XXX Department.
As XXX University is highly competitive, I took the GRE score on the XXXth of MONTH, 20XX.
I would like to know whether it is possible for me to improve my profile with the new GRE score.

Thank you for your consideration.

Best Regards,

Name

Pahan 1 / 1824

Mar 16, 2014 #2

I am a master degree applicant in XXX Department.

I am an applicant for the degree program of "?????????" (name of the degree, e.g. Masters in ?????) and I made my application on (date you first submitted it)

As XXX University is highly competitive, I took the GRE score on the XXXth of MONTH, 20XX.

However, I took the GRE exam again in ???? (month) ???? (year) in hope of improving my chances for obtaining admission to your university with a better GRE score.

I would like to know whether it is possible for me to improve my profile with the new GRE score.

I shall be thankful if you could let me know whether it is possible to update my previous application with the new GRE score.