Introduction email to prospective PhD supervisor

This is the email I'm using to introduce myself to potential PhD supervisors but haven't received any responses. Please review it.

Best regards,

QS

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Respected Dr. ***

I am ***** and I'm applying for a PhD in the ***** of the ***** for spring ****. I am currently pursuing my MSc in ***** from ***** and have completed my under-graduation from ******, one of the most reputed engineering schools in *****. I am interested to work in the domain of ****** in the ******** Research Group during my doctoral studies.

I'm currently working on devising a (100 word description of MSc project)

For the thesis of my under graduate degree, we, our team of 4 members, (50 word description of BS project).

Along with this, I am an active volunteer in *** at Europe, Middle East and Africa level, where I'm leading their effort, as ******, to encourage school students to join the engineering field. Recently, I've been nominated by the ******* for the ****** Award for my volunteer services.

I am really excited to explore the opportunities for working in the ***** Research Group under your supervision and I am confident that I'll be able to make positive contribution to the group.

Looking forward to your response.

Yours Sincerely,

*****

Hi,

I think you should edit this:

I am interested to in working work in the domain of ****** in the ******** Research Group during my doctoral studies.

Cheers!

Hi Athena,

Thanks. I'll change that.

QS