I write a recommendation letter for a student, but there are 2 sentences that I am not sure about. I think they are not written well.
Please help me to improve the expression.
1. Mr. Dan joined a research group that I also belonged to.
Explanation: Mr. Dan join a research group led by another professor, I am also in this group.
2. As his professor in my Linear Algebra and Advanced Calculus course, I have had the chance to observe his outstanding characteristics.
Explanation: I taught this student two courses. The main problem of the sentence is about the first half. If there is only one course, writing in this way is ok. But in the case of 2 courses, I think it's not written well. Please help me revise the expression
Thank you!
Please help me to improve the expression.
1. Mr. Dan joined a research group that I also belonged to.
Explanation: Mr. Dan join a research group led by another professor, I am also in this group.
2. As his professor in my Linear Algebra and Advanced Calculus course, I have had the chance to observe his outstanding characteristics.
Explanation: I taught this student two courses. The main problem of the sentence is about the first half. If there is only one course, writing in this way is ok. But in the case of 2 courses, I think it's not written well. Please help me revise the expression
Thank you!