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Nuclear power - Erasmus Mundus Sarena motivation letter



Kinami1 1 / 3  
Oct 29, 2024   #1
Motivation Letter for Erasmus-Mundus Sarena Program 2025 Cohort

Recent studies indicate that nuclear power, a radiation-based energy source, accounts for roughly 10% of global electricity production. To meet the needs of a growing population like Nigeria, and raise the living standards of millions of people, a 75% expansion in global primary energy supply will be required. However, this increase energy production will inevitably lead to a corresponding rise in radioactive waste generation, exposing an estimated 20/% of the population to above average radiation levels. This highlights the urgent need for careful and responsible management of spent fuel and radioactive waste to ensure the safety of people and the environment. Given the prevalence of radiation in our daily lives, it is essential to develop efficient technologies to minimize exposure risks, making the discussion of nuclear energy safety and security crucial for public acceptance in many countries. In light of these challenges and opportunities I am putting forward my application for the master's program in safe and reliable nuclear applications, as I aim to contribute to the development of sustainable and safe nuclear technologies that will benefit society and the environment.
During my undergraduate studies, I obtained a Bachelor of Science degree in Physics, showcasing exceptional proficiency in key subjects such as nuclear physics, Physical chemistry, Renewable Energy, organic and inorganic chemistry which encompasses physics of ionizing radiation, radiochemistry, nuclear safety and radiation detection. These subjects are directly related to the master's program in safe and reliable nuclear application, which aims to develop scientific, technical, and management skills enabling engineers to work in all domains related to nuclear energy and application. Motivated by this experience, my undergraduate research project focused on the 'Diagnosis of Cancer using Ionizing (X-ray) Radiation,' conducted at Aminu Kano Teaching Hospital, Kano, which focus in creating hybrid imaging systems that combine MRI, CT or PET scans for more accurate and comprehensive diagnostic information and also develop advanced imaging techniques and algorithms to improve the detection and differentiation of cancerous tissue. This initiative allowed me to merge theoretical knowledge with hands-on applications, reinforcing my commitment to utilizing physics for the betterment of society, particularly in the crucial realm of nuclear safety.
I recently concluded my master's program in physics with a specialization nuclear structure, where I emerged the top 1% of my college mates achieving a CGPA of 4.40 out 5.0, equivalent to 3.52 out of 4.0. My master's thesis, titled "Assessment of the impact of dysprosium ion doped magnesium sulfoborate glass systems on gamma radiation", this research direction aligns with the urgent global need to address climate change and to promote sustainability. By developing advanced technology for carbon capture, we can potentially reduce greenhouse gas emissions from industrial processes, which is one of the objectives of the program. Thereby contributing to global efforts to mitigate climate change. This study could lead to a significant reduction in atmospheric CO2 levels, with some studies suggesting that efficient carbon capture technologies could reduce industrial emissions by up to 90%.
Building on these accomplishments, I underwent a 3-month "MTV Nuclear Engineering Summer School" conducted by Michigan University. Which equip me on how to develop new technologies that detect and deter nuclear proliferation activities and to train the next generation of nuclear professionals. During this program, I gained in-depth knowledge in courses such nuclear security, nuclear reactor, nuclear safeguard and policy, monte carlo, and scintillator synthesis. This experienced provide me with a comprehensive understanding of the challenges and solution in nuclear safety and security, further preparing me for advanced studies in this field.
Having considered the current focus areas of the programme, I am particularly fascinated by the technology track "Nuclear Reactor Operation and Safety" My motivation for choosing the technology track is rooted in my past and current work involving, nuclear safety, radioprotection and material science, as well as a novel glass system doped with dysprosium ions to enhance radiation shielding work in my master thesis. I have a strong foundation and deep interest in this field, aligning with my future career aspirations. The comprehensive modules on physics of ionizing radiation, energy mix and energetic transitions, nuclear reactor physics and materials in nuclear engineering are particularly appealing. I believe that by integrating my existing expertise with the holistic perspective I will gain through these modules, I can embark on groundbreaking research in my final semester. This track will provide the perfect platform to further develop my skills and knowledge, ultimately allowing me to contribute significantly to the field. Also, an opportunity to explore other nationalities with different culture, background and people.
While I await your favorable response to start the SARENA Master's program in September 2025, accept my assurance with high esteem.

Thanks for considering my application.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15476  
Oct 29, 2024   #2
Recent studies

This opening makes the essay sound like you are presenting a research paper rather than a motivational letter. I would open the essay with a vision of what my country would look like once it becomes energy independent via nuclear energy, or something similar instead. That way the motivation for the line of studies directly relates to your future professional plans. The reviewer will be more interested in that rather than the data you are presenting that does not matter to him since he is not from your home country.

which aims to develop scientific,

Do not repeat information about the course to the reviewer. He is familiar with the demands of this masters course. You need to prove that your academic foundation is aligned with the course demands though so focus on that, but make it quick. Your letter is too wordy, very long, and difficult to follow at this point. You need to be more concise in your information presentation.
OP Kinami1 1 / 3  
Oct 29, 2024   #3
@Holt
Thanks so much for your suggestion, that's noted sir. I appreciate your time.
milan123 2 / 5  
Nov 2, 2024   #4
Yeah it's an strong opening and and your entire eassy has a reflection of your knowledge in the area of our study, while you should work a bit on writing tone, it should be more natural.
Best of luck for your upcoming endeavors : )
jasminee 2 / 7  
Nov 2, 2024   #5
While you express interest in the master's program, it would strengthen your application to explicitly connect your experiences and skills to specific aspects of the Erasmus-Mundus Sarena Program. Mention particular modules or faculty members you are excited about and how they align with your goals.
OP Kinami1 1 / 3  
Nov 2, 2024   #6
@milan123
Noted. Thanks


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