Planning to meet a stranger and asking him his interests.

Bangalore visit

How are you stay so far in India and inTamil Nadu.As per your last mail, i received, you still finalizing the dates to visit Bangalore.Do let me know the dates and how long you will be staying here.I am usually available on weekend. So I can meet to any of the weekends when you are available.I am not a hardcore drinker but take drinks once in a while to unwind myself. Do let me know what other interest you have apart from the Yoga. So I try my best to match few of them.As per nightlife, we have three popular places in Bangalore They are UB city, Indrananager and MG road.

My suggestion will be MG road, as it is well connected and easier for me to reach.
Do let me know if you need the place on weekend. I probably will be able to offer you space in case you haven't found one.

Mastinder, when you write a practice letter, always remember to follow the correct letter writing format when you present it here for review. While we can make comments on your grammar, I can also help you improve your formatting skills if you present the work in the proper manner for my consideration here. In the meantime, your grammar structure n this essay needs a lot of work. You do not use question marks when necessary, You do not place a space between sentences, you lack the use of connecting words, and plural rules are used inconsistently. Please refer to a more proper example of your letter below:

Dear Friend,

How do you like your stay in India and Tamil Nadu so far? Based on your last email, I am wondering if you have finalized your dates for your Bangalore visit yet? I hope you can tell me when you will be coming over so that I can be your host. My weekends are usually available. I don't really consider myself a hard drinker, I am more of a social drinker. I just drink to help myself unwind once in a while. Let me know if you enjoy doing other things aside from Yoga. I'd like to know what else we have in common that we can do together during your visit. Don't worry about the nightlife in India, we have three popular hangouts namely; UB City, Indrananger, and MG Road. I would love to take you to MG Road when you come over. It is near the place where I live and is a very exciting place to visit.

Let me know if you need a place to stay for the weekend, you are more than welcome to stay at my place if you haven't booked a hotel yet. I hope to hear from you soon.

Your friend,
Mastinder

@Holt
Thanks, Holt. Yes, putting the question mark is always an issue for me. I know we can still ask the question without question mark. So I need to work on that.Also, you rightly mentioned I need to work on plural rules and yes the connecting words as well.